金太阳新课标资源网wx.jtyjy.com2013届高考英语专题精辟学案书面表达增强书面表达效果的技巧一、遣词方面：有换词概念1．使用高级的词汇或短语或替换同义初级词汇。例1.Hestudieshard.Sohedoeswellinallthesubjects.＝Hestudieshard.Therefore,_hedoeswellinallthesubjects.＝Hestudieshard.Asaresult,hedoeswellinallthesubjects.＝Hestudieshard.As_a_consequence,_hedoeswellinallthesubjects.2．使用单词的多种词性，使句子多样化。例1.AdictionaryisveryimportantinEnglishstudy.＝Adictionaryisof_great_importanceinEnglishstudy.例2.Heissuccessfulinhiscareer.＝Heachieves_a_great_successinhiscareer.二、造句方面：使句子多样化形容词开头：Theboy,hungryandthirsty,wentbackhome.Hungry_and_thirsty,_theboywentbackhome.副词开头：Thechildrenstayedtherequietly.Quietly,_thechildrenstayedthere.不定式开头：Hegotupearlytocatchthefirstbus.To_catch_the_first_bus,_hegotupearly.分词开头：Ifyougivemeenoughtime,Icandoitwell.Given_enough_time,_Icandoitwell.Afterhefinishedtheexercise,hewentout.Finishing_the_exercise,_hewentout.(2011浙江卷)假设你是高中生李越，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写(toscribble)和乱丢垃圾(tolitter)的行为，请用英语给校长写一封100－120个词的信。信中应包括以下内容：1．说明写信目的；2．对这些行为进行批评；3．提出建议。注意：信的抬头、落款及信的第一句已给出(不计词数)。June8,2011DearMr.Headmaster，I'mLiYue,astudentfromClass1,SeniorⅡ._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourfaithfully，LiYue解题步骤：第1页共8页金太阳新课标资源网wx.jtyjy.com金太阳新课标资源网wx.jtyjy.com第一步：审题定文体。题目已明确要求是写一封信给校长反映校园里随意涂写和乱丢垃圾的行为，信的抬头﹑落款及信的第一句已给出。第二步：确定总体时态和人称。人称：第一人称。时态：一般现在时。第三步：确定写作思路，所需主要词汇和所用表达结构。写作思路：根据题目要求，先要说明写信目的是为了反映校园中存在的随意涂写(toscribble)和乱丢垃圾(tolitter)的行为；然后对这些行为进行批评；并提出可行性建议。因此作文内容表达分三个层次展开。主要词汇：improperbehaviour,makesourschooldirtyandunpleasant,setupspecificrules重点句型：在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成句子：表写信目的的句型：Iamwritingtodrawyourattentionto…表对不良现象提出批评的句型：Itisnotappropriateforstudentsto…表向对方(1)针对校方：Iwonderifschoolcould…(可用被动语态句式)Somemeasurescanbetakentopreventstudentsfrom…(2)针对学生：studentsshouldbeencouragedto/discouragedto…(3)可用一个强调句结尾：Itisonlywiththejointeffortsofbothteachersandstudentsthatourschoolwillbecomeamorepleasantplaceinthenearfuture.【范文赏析】June8,2011DearMr.Headmaster,IamLiYue,astudentfromClass1,SeniorⅡ.Iamwritingtodrawyourattentiontosomeimproperbehaviouramongusstudents:litteringandscribbling.Itmakesourschooldirtyandunpleasant,anddoeshardtotheimageofourschool.IalwaysfeelashamedwheneverIseethis.Itisclearlynotappropriateforastudenttolitterandscribbleabout.Iwonderiftheschoolcouldplacemoredustbinsaroundandsetupspecificrulesagainstsuchbehaviour.Atthesametime,studentsshouldbeencouragedtodevelopgoodhabitsandbetterbehavethemselves.Ibelievethat,withthejointeffortsofbothteachersandstudents,ourschoolwillbecomeamoreenjoyableplaceinthenearfuture.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Yoursfaithfully,LiYue议论文(persuasive/argumentativeessays)是一种说理型文体，作者要通过摆事实、讲道理来说服读者同意自己的观点或接受自己的建议。在近几年的高考中，议论文所占比例越来越多，...
