Howtowritecorrectsentences?Writing（二）Topic:behaviorsinpublicWhatisasentence?Hedropslitter.Subject(主语)VerbObject(宾语)Hesleepsinclass.Wehelpeachother.MsDaiteachesusEnglishseriously.Wekeepourclassroomclean.Wearepolite.Therearesometeacherslisteningtoushere.S+VS+V+OS+V+O1+O2S+V+O+OCS+V+PTherebe句型Enjoytwolongsentences!无论句子有多长，它都是由简单句构成。主语和谓语动词是简单句基本单位。WhenwemakesomemistakesinourEnglishcompositions,MsDai,myEnglishteacher,alwayshelpsuscorrectthem,sowelearnalotfromthat.Ifsomeonelooksveryproudandsatisfiedwithhimself,wewillsayhelookslikethecatthatatethecanary(金丝雀).satisfiedcomposition主语和谓语动词句子的核心Ihopemyhighschoolcanmoreinteresting!云渊Ihopethatmyhighschoolcanbemoreinteresting.Don’ttalkinclass!(祈使句)Whataniceday!(感叹句)Ihaveafriendwhohavelonghair.(朱星)Ihaveafriendwhohaslonghair.1、一个句子中的动词不能缺！2、主语和谓语动词要保持一致！1.Notonlymytecherbutalsomyclassmates____excellent.2.Everyoneexceptthetwins____adictionary.3.BothyouandI______havinganEnglishclass.4.NeitheryounorI_____havingaChineseclass.5.Theearth__________aroundthesun.6.MsDai_____workedhereforover22years.arehasareamgoes/moveshasThemistakeswehavemade.Ieatvegetablesandfruit.Cankeephealthy.Ioftenreadbooks.Becausecanopenupone’seyestotheoutsideword.(徐汉国)Ieatvegetablesandfruit.Theycankeepmehealthy.Ioftenreadbooksbecausetheycanopenupmyeyestotheoutsideworld.IeatvegetablesandfruitsothatIcankeepmyselfhealthy.AndIoftenreadbookstoopenupmyeyestotheoutsideworld.学会句子的变通，用自己会的语言写句子！Studentsareimportanttostudy.(陈敏敏)Tostudyisimportantforstudents.Itisimportantforstudentstostudy.I’llgraduation.(善宁)I’llgraduate.错误归纳：句法、词法、词义（词性）、拼写等。Themistakeswehavemade.Talkaboutbehaviorsinpublic!It’sveryimportantforustobehavewellinpublic!Weshould/shouldn’t…Peopleare/aren’tsupposedto…Itispolite/impoliteto…Itisbelievedthatweshould…Ithink/amsurethat…Helpingothersishelpingourselves.Differentsubjectscanmakethearticlenicer!不同的主语使文章更美！Lookandsay!Theboyisimpolite.Theboywhodropslitterinpublicisimpolite.It’simpolitefortheboytodroplitterinpublic.Wedon’tlikepeoplewhoareimpolite.Droppinglitterinpublicisimpolite.Itiscertain/believedthatIstronglybelievepeoplewho…Whatthewomansaidiswrong.spitsmokecutinline!speakimpolitewords.为配合我市“礼仪温州”活动的开展以“Howtobehavewell?”为主题的英语作文比赛，请你以一名初中生的身份写一篇100词左右的短文参赛。提示：（1）守时，不说脏话；（2）礼貌待人，热心帮助；（3）遵守交通规则，不乱扔垃圾；（4）……注意：（1）文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名；（2）内容可适当扩展。主题句Goodbehaviorisveryimportantinourmodernsociety.ThereisanactivityaboutmannersinWenzhou.Ithinkit’sverymeaningful.Asastudent,…审为配合我市“礼仪温州”活动的开展以“Howtobehaveweell?”为主题的英语作文比赛，请你以一名初中生的身份写一篇100词左右的短文参赛。提示：（1）守时，不说脏话；（2）礼貌待人，热心帮助；（3）遵守交通规则，不乱扔垃圾；（4）……注意：（1）文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名；（2）内容可适当扩展。1.Beontime2.don’tsayimpolitewords.3.Bepolite/friendlytopeople4.Helppeoplewarmly5.Obeytrafficrules6.don’tdroplitter7.don’tsmokeinpulic8.don’tcutinline列1.Beontime2.don’tsayimpolitewords.3.Bepolite/friendlytopeople4.Helppeoplewarmly5.Obeytrafficrules6.don’tdroplitter7.don’tsmokeinpulic8.don’tcutinline扩连also,and,so,what’smore,besides,ontheonehand,ontheotherhand,however,toone’ssurprise,tobehonest,asastudent,asyoucansee,forexample…审列扩连查抄主题句结束语1、明白主语和谓语动词在句子中的重要性；2、关注主谓一致；3、使用不同的主语使文章变得丰富；4、学会句子的变通，用自己会的语言写作；5、写作过程：审、列、扩、连、查、抄！6、注意一定要写加上主题句和结束语！SummaryFinishoffthecomposition
