试题习题、尽在百度仔细审题、认真作答专题限时集训(二十九)短文改错(Ⅳ)(对应学生用书第144页)A(2017·汕头市教学质量监测)Friendshipisveryimportanttoeveryone，especiallytome.Now，IwouldliketodescribeoneofmybestfriendswhosenamearePetou.ThefirstreasonwhyIconsiderhimasmybestfriendisbecausehehasaverywarmpersonality.Healwayssmilepolitelyatme,makemeabsolutelydelightedwhenImeethim.What'smore，honestishisgoodmanner—heneverliesme.Inaddition，heisthecaringandcompassionatefriend.He'swillingtohelpmewheneverIhaveintrouble.ThesecondreasonisthatPetouisreallyexcellently.Heexcelsateverysubject，whichmakesmeadmirehimverymuch.Tosummarize，Petouhasaverygoodpersonality.Besides，hehasagreatabilitytohelpotherfriendsandhim.Ireallylikehim.【答案】Friendshipisveryimportanttoeveryone，especiallytome.Now，IwouldliketodescribeoneofmybestfriendswhosenameareisPetou.ThefirstreasonwhyIconsiderhimasmybestfriendisbecausethathehasaverywarmpersonality.Healwayssmilesmilespolitelyatme，makemakingmeabsolutelydelightedwhenImeethim.What'smore，honesthonestyishisgoodmanner—heneverlies∧tome.Inaddition，heistheacaringandcompassionatefriend.He'swillingtohelpmewheneverIhave﹨introuble.ThesecondreasonisthatPetouisreallyexcellentlyexcellent.Heexcelsateverysubject，whichmakesmeadmirehimverymuch.Tosummarize，Petouhasaverygoodpersonality.Besides，hehasagreatabilitytohelpotherfriendsandhimme.Ireallylikehim.试题习题、尽在百度仔细审题、认真作答第一处：are→is.考查主谓一致.whose引导的定语从句的先行词是代词“one”，因此谓语动词应该用单数.第二处：because→that.考查名词性从句.主语为名词reason，表语从句中的连接词要用that.第三处：smile→smiles.考查动词时态和主谓一致.由后文“whichmakesme”可知，主句应用一般现在时；主语为第三人称单数，谓语动词应该用单数.第四处：make→making.考查非谓语动词.make与前面的谓语动词之间无连词，故此处应用现在分词短语作结果状语.第五处：honest→honesty.考查名词.形容词不能作主语，应该用名词.第六处：lies后加to.考查固定用法.lietosb.意为“对某人说谎”.第七处：the→a.考查冠词.此处表示他是一个热心并且有同情心的人，表示泛指，应该用不定冠词.第八处：删除in.考查介词.句意：无论何时我有困难，他都愿意帮助我.havetrouble意为“有困难”，in多余.第九处：excellently→excellent.考查形容词.作is的表语应该用形容词.第十处：him→me.考查代词.Petou能帮助别人也能帮助我.B(2017·湖南省部分重点中学考前演练)Iusuallygotoschoolbybike.AndthismorningIwentonfoot.Onthewaytoschool，Ihappentowitnessanaccident.Amiddle-agedwomanwasknockeddownbyacarwhilecrossesthestreet.Seeingthatwashappeningonthescene，Imaderushforthewomantohelp.Onepasser-bygotoutofhiscellphoneandcalledthepolice.Ihelpedtocarrythewomantosafeanddressherwound.Aroundtenminuteslate,anambulancearrivedandtookhimtohospital.Icontinuedmywaytoschool，feelinghappilythatIcouldoffersomehelpintime.【答案】Iusuallygotoschoolbybike.AndButthismorningIwentonfoot.Onthewaytoschool，Ihappenhappenedtowitnessanaccident.Amiddle-agedwomanwasknockeddownbyacarwhilecrossescrossingthestreet.Seeingthatwhatwashappeningonthescene，Imade试题习题、尽在百度仔细审题、认真作答∧arushforthewomantohelp.Onepasser-bygotout﹨ofhiscellphoneandcalledthepolice.Ihelpedtocarrythewomantosafesafetyanddressherwound.Aroundtenminuteslatelater，anambulancearrivedandtookhimhertohospital.Icontinuedmywaytoschool，feelinghappilyhappythatIcouldoffersomehelpintime.第一处：And→But.考查连词.前后句之间是转折关系，故用But.第二处：happen→happened....
