启迪中学2010-2011学年度第一学期高三英语考练短文改错专练（2）（时间：45分钟满分50分）班级姓名(一)LastweekmyparentsandItookatwo-daystriptoEmeiMountaininSichuan.Aseveryoneknows,it’sfamousmountainwithallkindsofplantsandanimals.Theweatherwasfine.Itwasaboutnoonwearrivedatthefootofthemountain.Thethreeofthemwereveryexcited.Asweclimbedthemountain,wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.OnthewayupIwasbusytakingpicturesincethescenerywassobeautiful.Thetimepassesquickly.Eveningcamedown.Wespentthenightinahotelatthetopofthemountain.Thefoodwasexpensiveandtheservicewasgood.IwassotiredthatIfellasleepatthemomentmyheadtouchedthepillow.第一行：two-days改为two-day第二行：mountain前加a第三行：noon后加when第四行：them改为us第五行：visiting改为visited第六行：pictures；passed第七行：去down第八行：and改为but第九行：去at（二）Manyteachersworryabouttheeffectsoftelevisionwithyoungpeople.Accordingtostudies,manychildrenspendmoretimewatchingtelevisionthantheyspendinschool.Becausesomuchviewing,childrenmaynotbedevelopthehabitofreadandtheabilitytoenjoythemselves.Nooneworriesmuchabouttheradioprogramyoungpeoplelistento,althoughradioscanbeverynoise.Teachersalsowonderabouttheeffectsoftelevisioncommercials.Ononeyeartheaveragechildwillsee25,000televisioncommercials,allplannedandwrittenbygrown-upstomakechildrentowantthingsthattheydon'trealneed.第一行：with改为on第二行：many改为some第三行：becauseof第四行：删去be；read改为reading第五行：programs第六行：noisy第七行：On改为In第八行：去掉want前的to；real改为really启迪中学高三英语考练第1页共5页（三）I’mthecaptainofourschoolteamsowithmyfellowplayerswe’vewonseveralgames.Therewillanimportantgamenextmonth.Butoneofthebestplayerinourteamtoldmejustthenthathewouldn’tplaybasketballoncemore.Hisparentsaskedhimtospendinmoretimepreparingforthecollegeentranceexamination.Ifeelsorrytohim.Buthisparentsthinkgotocollegeismoreimportantthanplayingsportsandcollegewastheonlyplaceforasmartboylikehisson.Somyfriendhadnochoice.Hewantedtomaketheirparentshappy.第一行：so改为and第二行：will后加be第三行：player改为players；then改为now第四行：once改为any；删去in第五行：to改为for第六行：go改为going；第七行：was改为is第八行：their改为his(四)WhenIfirstlearnedtowriteEnglish,Iranintomanydifficulties.ThemainproblemwasinthatIalwaysthoughtinChineseandtriedtotranslateanythingintoEnglish.Myteacheradvisedmetokeepmydiary.Ifollowedheradviceandshouldputdown100wordsorsoeachday.SoonIbegantoenjoytalktomyselfonpaperasIwaslearningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.OnedayIwrotealittlestoryandshowedtomyteacher.Shelikeditverymuchandreadsittotheclass.Allsaidthestorywasagoodone.Theirwordwereagreatencouragementtome.第一行：write后加in第二行：去掉第一个in第三行：anything改为everything第四行：my改为a；去掉should第五行：talk改为talking第六行：me改为myself第七行：showed后加it第八行：reads改为read；word改为words（五）DearRalph,I’manewcomerhereofasmalltown.Iwoulddescribemyselfasshyandquietly.Beforemyclassmates,itseemsalwaysdifficultformetodothingsaswellthem.I'msuretheywilllaughtomeandseemeasafool.SoIfeelhappyeveryday.Besides,Ihavefewfriends.Idon'tknowthattheydon'tliketotalkwithme.Sometimes,wetalkedtoeachotherverywellinclass,butafterclasswebecomestrangerat启迪中学高三英语考练第2页共5页once.Iamtryingtoimprovethesituationsinceitdoesn’tseemtowork.CanyoutellmeaboutwhatIshoulddo?Yours,XiaoWei第一行：of改为from第二行：quietly改为quiet...
