高考英语新型短文改错当堂练文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。No.1Deareditor,Iamahighschoolstudent.Afewdaysbefore,oneofmyverygoodfriendtoldmethathewasgoingtostopschool.Hesaidthathewantedtostarthisown’sbusiness.Itriedmybesttogethimtochangehismind,andfailed.Irealizeitisdifficultofmetochangehismind.Heisnotdoingsogoodinhisstudies.Theprocessismoreimportantthantheresultis.Nowthereareonly90daysbeingleftbeforethetest.Iamnotsurehisdecisionisrightorwrong.Ineededyouradvice.∧agofriendsownbutforwellwhetherneedNo.2Makingropesareoneoftheoldesttradesintheworld.Weknowwhatpeoplemaderopesmorethan5000yearsago,becausewehavefoundedropesinveryoldEgyptiantombs.Theymakesomeropesfromthehairofcamels.Theymadeanotherfromtwistedgrass.Peopleusedthemfortyinganimal,forgettingwaterfromdeepwellsandforpullinglargestoneswhichtheyusedtheminbuilding.Intheveryolddays,peoplemaderopesbythehand,buttodaymachinesmakethem.Inverypoorcountriestoday,peoplestillmakeropesashisancestorsdidthemintheveryolddays.isthatfoundmadeothersanimalstheirNo.3Mygrandfatherwasateacher.Hewastheheadteacherofaschoolforboysattheagesofthirteenandeighteen.Iknowthathewasakindman,becausewhenIamyoung,hegavemepresents,andsetmeonhisknees,andtoldmestories.Andtheboysathisschoolwereafraidofhim.Atschool,whenhewalkedintoaroomfullofnoiseboys,therewassilenceatonce.Whenhelookedataboywithacertainlookinhiseye,thatboywentredintheface,andlookeddownhisshoes.Ifaboybroughttohimcarelesswork,mygrandfatherpickedupaboy’sbookandthrewitacrosstheroom,shouting,“Doitallagain,andtakeitbackthefirstthinginthemorning!”Iftheboywaslater,orifheforgottotakethework,hehadtodoitagain.∧betweenwasButnoisyeyesthebringlateatNo.4IambackinBrightonnowaftergreatholidaywithRosieinDublin.Ireallyenjoyedit.Wetravelbytrainandboat.Ihatedtheboatjourney,forItriedtosleep,butitwasverydifficulty.Wewereallverytiredwhenwearrived.Wehadstayedwithherparentsfortwoweeksandtheycookedlovelymealstous.IpractisedmyEnglishallthetime.WevisitedRosie’sfriendsandalsosomeoftheDublin’sbeautifulbuildings.Thecastlewasclosesowedidn’tgetinto,wejustlookedattheoutside.Ilikedtheuniversityverymuch.Whatgreattobeastudent!∧atravelleddifficultbothforclosedinHowNo.5Afteradayofworkandplay,thebodyneedstohavearest.Sleepisnecessaryforgoodhealthy.Duringthistime,thebodyrecoversfromtheactivitiesoftheday.Therestwhatyougetwhilesleepingenablesyourbodytoprepareitforthenextday.Therearefourlevelsofsleep.Eachisalittledeeperthantheoneago.Asyousleep,yourmusclesrelax.Yourheartjumpsmoreslowly,andyourbrainslowsdown.Afteryoureachthefourthlevel,yourbodyshiftsbackorforthfromonelevelofsleeptotheother.Ifyouhavetroublefallasleep,somepeoplesuggestbreathingslowlyanddeeply.Andotherpeoplebelievethatdrinkwarmmilkhelpsmakeyousleepy.Thereisalsoaoldsuggestionthatcountingsheepputyousleep.∧healththatitselfbeforebeatsandfallingdrinkingantoNo.6ThecompanythatWaltDisneystarteddoesnotjustmakefilm.In1955WaltDisneyopenedafirstDisneylandinLosAngeles.In1971DisneyWorldwasopenedinFlorida.In1983TokyoDisneylandwasopenedinJapan.Itwascostbetween$500or600million.In1992EuroDisneywasopenedinFrance.Disneyparksarethecleanestparkswhatyoucanimagine.Theworkersworkingtheremustdresscleanclothes.InDisneylandallthecharactersfromWaltDisney’sfilmscanbefounded.VisitorsliketheSleepingBeautyCastlebest.ManystreetsinDisneylandwerebuilttolooklikethatintheUSAin1890s.Peoplewalkaroundwearingnineteenth-centuryclothing.∧filmstheandthatwearfoundthosetheclothesNo.7Marywasapopstar.Sheboughtnewhouse,andhiredamantopaintingtheroomsinnewcolors.Itwasdifficultytogetticketsforhershow,becauseofeverybodywantedtoseeit.Soshedecidedtogivethepaintertwoofthebestseat.Shehopedthatthiswouldmakehimtoworkbetter.Hetooktheticketswithoutsayingsomething.Shelistenednomoreabouthimuntiltheendofthemonth,whenshegotthepainter'sbill.Onitwasthewords:“Threehour'swatchingyousinganddance:$6.After5pmIgettwodollarsanhourinsteadofonedollar.”∧apaintdifficultseatsanythingheardwerehours’
