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2013届高考英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析（第二部分专题练评）（专题二图画式1）假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者；以下漫画内容是你和你的朋友们上星期六在“theFairyLakePark”观光时的所见所闻，请根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。注意：1.描述漫画内容及发表个人感想。2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；3.词数150左右（短文标题已经给出，不计入总词数）；参考词汇：告示牌signMindYourBehaviorinPublicPlaces讲评公民道德话题的看图写作，均是现实生活中的片段展示，探讨面对公民道德缺失的社会现象个人的感想，即公民道德缺失原因与解决方法，考生应该有话可说。本篇是看图作文，属于先叙后议的文体。认真看图，结合文字和图画，确立所要表达的主题是什么。本篇的主题就是标题所表达的内容“MindYourBehaviorinPublicPlaces”，无需考生多想。围绕确立的主题，仔细看图和文字，列出文字提示和图中的要点。文字提示中的要点：“我”和“我”的朋友们上星期六在“theFairyLakePark”观光。（这是交代事情发1生的时间和地点）遣词造句（注意多重表达）1.①LastSunday,myfriendsandIwenttravellingintheFairyLakePark.②LastSunday,I,aswellasmyfriendswenttopayavisittotheFairyLakePark.③LastSunday,togetherwithmyfriends,wentsightseeingintheFairyLakePark.④LastSunday,IwentsightseeingwithmyfriendsintheFairyLakePark.2.①Theparkwasfulloffreshairandbeautyofspring.Thesunwasshining.Birdsweresingingbeautifully.②Therewasfreshairandbeautyofspringhereandthereintheparkwithsunshiningandbirdswereheardsingingbeautifully.③Theparkwasfulloffreshnessandbeautyofspring,withthesunshiningandbirdssinging.3.①Ayoungcoupleinaboatwereeating,talkingandlaughingloudly.Theydidn’trealizethattherewassomebodyelsearound.Theyspatandeventhrewrubbishintothelakewithoutnoticingthesign“Don’tthrowrubbishintothelake”.②Ayoungcoupleinaboatwereeating,talkingandlaughingloudlyasiftherewasnobodyelsenearby.Theyspatandeventhrewrubbishintothelakeandtheyseemednottonoticethesign“Don’tthrowrubbishinto2thelake”.③Ayoungcoupleinaboatwereeating,talkingandlaughingloudlyasiftherewasnobodyelsenearby.Theyspatandeventhrewrubbishintothelake,turningablindeyetothesign“Don’tthrowrubbishintothelake”.④Ayoungcoupleinaboatwereeating,talkingandlaughingloudlyasiftheyweretheonlypeopleintheworld.Theyspatandeventhrewrubbishintothelake,totallyignoringthenoticeablesign“NoLittering”nearby.美与丑形成鲜明对比。连贯成篇(注意红体字部分)LastSunday,IwentsightseeingwithmyfriendsintheFairyLakePark.Theparkwasfulloffreshnessandbeautyofspring,withthesunshiningandbirdssinging.Whenwewereenjoyingthefantasticsceneryaround,somethingunpleasantcaughtmyeye.Tomysurprise,ayoungcoupleinaboatwereeating,talkingandlaughingloudlyasiftheyweretheonlypeopleintheworld.What'sworse,theyspatandeventhrewrubbishintothelake,totallyignoringthenoticeablesign“NoLittering”nearby.Whatashame!发表个人感想时可适当发挥，但内容要符合逻辑，层次要分明，衔接要自然。围绕漫画主题自拟感想可以按照这样的思路去自拟感想：这对夫妇的行为给了“我”什么印象——如果人人都这样会造成什么后果——我们应该怎么做——总结性话语。遣词造句（注意多重表达）31.①Whatthecoupledidmadeabadimpressiononme.②Whatthecoupledidleftmeinthought.③Ihadnochoicebuttotakewhatthecoupledidintoconsideration.④Suchbehaviordidleftmedeepinthought.2.①Ifwedowhatthecoupledidaswasshownintheabovepicture,alllakeswillbeseriouslypollutedandsoonturnedintohugedustbins.②IfallpeoplevisitingtheFairyLakeParkdoasthecoupledid,thelakewillbeseriouslypollutedandturnedintoahugedustbinsoonerorlater.③Ifallvisitorsto...