2007年湖南省高考作文：假设你叫王平，李华是你的同窗好友，请根据下列要点，用英文给李华写一篇毕业留言。要点：1.简要描述李华在你心目中的印象2.用一到两个相关事例进行具体描述；3.对李华表示美好的祝福写作指导：第一：与2006年相比，题型变化不大，依然是介于提纲式作文和开放式作文中间的一种题型，主要内容给出，但是还必须考生发挥具体事例，这与我们M5U1project的第二篇文章相符；第二：内容变化不大，去年是写老师Mr.Moore，今年写的是同窗好友；第三：考试形式依然是上课时强调的应用文—留言，留言其实和书信，便条差不多。评分标准：要点全面，且详略得当；结构清晰(总分总);文章连贯；DearLihuaOfallmyclassmates,you,themostconsiderateandwarm-heartedgirl,arealwaysreadytogiveyourhandtoeveryonewhoneedshelp.(文章第一段写第一个要点，即文章中心)IclearlyrememberthatlastyearourclassmatesXiaomeisufferedfromacuteappendix(急性阑尾炎)atnight.Itisyouwhotookhertothehospitalinmidnightasquicklyaspossible.Inordernottodisturbothersyouevendidn’tcallupotherclassmatestoaccompanyyou.Untilthenextmorningotherclassmatesinourdormitorygottoknowthefact.Andweknewthatyoudidn’tsleepallthenighttoattendtoXiaomei.Moreoverinourdailylife,youalwayscomforttheonewhoareindepressionbecauseofbadscoreorclassmatesrelationship.Sowewouldliketocallyouthesweetsister.(第二段举出你能够想出的最简单的事例，作文的关键不是你的事例有多新颖，而是你写的句子是否能够显示出你的水平，比如说难词，比如说难句，比如说你是否用了联接词，如inorderto,until,moreover,so等)Allinall,youarethefantasticgirlwhodeservesallthebeautifulprospects,suchasstudyinginBeijingUniversity.Finallywishyousuccessandrealizeyourdream!YourssincerelyWangPing(第三段总结并给出你的祝福)DearLiHua,IoftenthinkthatI’mluckythatIhaveyouasmybestfriend.YoualwayslendmeahandwhenIamintrouble.IrememberitclearlythatIdidbadlyinoneimportantexam.MyparentsaswellasmyteachersthoughtIwasn’thardenough.AndIwaslaughedatbysomeclassmates,whichmademereallysad.Butyou’retheonlyonewhounderstoodme.Yousaidmanywordstocheermeup.Thankyouforgivingmesomuchencouragement.Besides,whenIhavedonesomethingwrong,youpointitout.What’smore,you’reveryhonestandcanalwayskeepyourword.Wesharethesameinterestssuchasreadinganddrawing.Withoutyou,Iwon’tbesohappy.Wewillgotodifferentschoolssoon,butourfriendshipwillbeforever.Ibelievethatyouwillbebetterinthefuture.Bestwishestoyou!Yours,WangPing一、举例常用的开头语：Lastyear/lastweek/lastweekend/oneday/lastSundayafternoon/once…Iwillneverforgetthedaywhen….IrememberIclearlythat…Doyoustillrememberthat…Althoughithappenedtwoyearsago,Iwillneverforget…I’llneverforgetthememorableday…二、有关友谊的表达：makefriendswithsb/gettoknowsb/knowsbverywell/trusteachother/keepintouchwithsb/closefriend/precious/understanding/friendly/intimate/generous/thoughtful/goodtempered/graceful/turntomyfriendforhelp/havesthincommon/bewillingtoofferhelp/getalongwellwitheachother/betolerantto…学生习作一：DearLulu:Howareyou?IoftenthinkthatI’mreallyluckytohaveyouasmybestfriendsinceafaithfulfriendishardtofind.YouarealwaysreadytolendmeahandwhenIamintrouble.Istillrememberthethinghappenedinlastyear,whenthenewtermbegan,everybodyintheclassexceptmehadtakenthesummerextralesson,youknewthatIwassoworriedthattime,becauseIwasafraidIcouldn’tkeeppacewiththeclass.Fortunately,youlentmeyournotesandencouragedmenottogiveup.Iwasdeeplyimpressed.Besides,youarekind,mercy,honestandout-going.Wehavealottotalkwitheachotherandwehavealmostthesameinterests.Inaword,Ifeelhappyandrelaxedwhenwespenttimetogether.Last,IhopewecanbothtreasurethisfriendshipandIbelieveourfriendshipwilllastforever.学生习作二：DearJulia:Ihaven’theardfromyouforweeks.Iseverythingok?Recently,Ilearntalotmoreaboutfriendship,whichremindedmeofyou—myjuniorschoolclassmateandmybestfriend.Afaithfulfriendishardtofind,butI’mreallyfortunatetohaveyouasmybestfriend.YouarealwayswillingtohelpmewhenIfacechallenge.Ican’tforgetthedayswhenwewereingrade3.Yousatbymyside.Sometimes,youwerelikemyteacher,almostallmyacademicquestionsweresolvedbyyou.Iwashopelessbeforethattime,butwiththehelpofyou,gonewereallmybadfeelings.Then,Ididagoodjobinthetext—graduationexamination.Ifeltgratefulforyourgreathelpwithmylowgrades,andthefeelinglaststillnow.wordsfailtoexpressmyheart-feltthankstoyou.IthinkourfriendshipwilllastforeverbecauseI’lltreasureourfriendship—oneofthemostgreatandloyalemotions.
