写作指导·技法点拨写一封劝说信1.覆盖所有的要点2.应用较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑词汇,句型,语法多样化要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？如何算是一篇好文章？劝说性的书信写作文体分析劝说性的书信写作目的是向某个组织或个人提出劝说性的建议的一种应用文体。结构和要点第一段：点明写信的目的第二段：说清楚建议的事项及理由第三段：再次提出希望审题谋篇假设你叫李华，请给NicolausCopernicus写一封100个词左右的信劝说他出版自己的理论著作，这样可以让每个人都了解他的理论，从而推动科学的发展。体裁话题时态人称劝说信劝说出版理论著作一般现在时及将来时态第二人称结构首段：点明写信的目的，希望NicolausCopernicus出版他的理论著作中段：说清楚建议出版其理论著作的理由尾段：再一次提出希望NicolausCopernicus出版他的理论著作结构首段中段尾段Iamwritingtopersuadeyouto…Iam…andeagerto/dyingtopersuadeyouto…(Istronglyhopeyoucan…forseveralreasons.)(Herearemyreasons.)Firstofall,Ithinkitwouldbebetterif…Becauseyouwill...if...Besides/Moreover/What’smore/Furthermore,I’dliketogivemyadviceon.../Iwouldliketosuggestthat...IfIwereyou,Iwould...Ofcourse,thechallengeyouwillfaceisgreatifyou...Finally/Lastbutnotleast,...Nomatterhow...,...will...Pleasetakemyadviceintoconsiderationandmakeafinaldecision.SoIsincerelyhopeyoucan...Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Challengeyourmemory1.Iamastudentstudyingastronomyand_________________yournewtheoryaboutthesolarsystem.2.Thepresenttheory_______________________________.3.______________________isnot_____________________iftheearthis________________________.4.Itisalsostrangethatthebrightnessofsomestars________________.5.Sothesunis_______________thesolarsystem.6.Yourobservationhave____________________________overmanyyears.7.You_________________________ifyoupublishyournewtheory.8.Sciencewill_____________ifpeopledon’t_________________theirideas.9.__________________________,Ithink,timewill________thatyourideasareright.Iamdyingtoreaddoesn’tmakesense/makesnosenseThewaytheplanetsmovewhatyouhaveobservedthecentreoftheuniverseseemstochangethecentreofbeenverycarefullycarriedoutwillfaceagreatchallengeneveradvancehavethecouragetoputforwardNomatterhowpeopleopposeitprove句式升级4.Itisalsostrangethatthebrightnessofsomestarsseemstochange.7.Youwillfaceagreatchallengeifyoupublishyournewtheory.8.Sciencewillneveradvanceifpeopledon’thavethecouragetoputforwardtheirideas.Strangely,…ItisalsostrangethatThechallengeyouwillfaceisgreatif……unlesspeoplehavethecourageto…过渡词1）递进：furthermore,moreover,besides,inaddition2）转折：however,but,nevertheless,afterall3）总结：finally,atlast,inbrief,toconclude,so4）强调：really,indeed,certainly,surely,aboveall5）对比：onthecontrary;contraryto,ontheonehand,ontheotherhand妙笔成篇DearNicolausCopernicus,IamastudentstudyingastronomyandIamdyingtoreadyournewtheoryaboutthesolarsystem.Ihopeyouwillpublishitforseveralreasons.Thepresenttheorydoesn’tmakesense.________________,thewaytheplanetsmoveisnotwhatyouhaveobservediftheearthisthecentreoftheuniverse;______________________,strangely,thebrightnessofsomestarsseemstochange._____thesunisthecentreofthesolarsystem._______________,yourobservationshavebeenverycarefullycarriedoutovermanyyears.____________,thechallengeyouwillfaceisgreatifyoupublishyournewtheory.___________,sciencewillneveradvanceunlesspeoplehavethecouragetoputforwardtheirideas.Nomatterhowpeopleopposeit,________,timewillprovethatyourideasareright._____Isincerelyhopeyoucanpublishyournewtheory.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,LiHuaOntheonehandontheotherhandSoAsweallknowOfcourseHoweverIthinkSoAssignment假设你是李华，你的英国朋友John最近沉迷于电脑游戏不能自拔，严重影响了学习和身心健康，请你给他写一封信，劝他改掉这个坏习，并对他的学习生活给出自己的建议。DearJohn,IreallyfeelworriedaboutyouwhenIheardthatyouwereaddictedtocomputergames.I’mwritingtopersuadeyoutoquitcomputergames.Youusedtodowellinyourlessonsandtookanactivepartintheactivitiesatschool.Butnowyouaresocrazyaboutcomputergamesthatyouhavenointerestinyourschoolworkanddon'tlistentoteachersascarefullyasbeforeinclass.Also,youcan'thandinyourhomeworkontime.Perhapsplayingcomputergamescanmakeyoufeelrelaxed,butifyouspendtoomuchtimeonit,youwillhavelesstimetostudy.Anditmaydoharmtoyourhealth.Forexample,itcanhurtyoureyesandneck.Ihopeyoushouldachieveabalancebetweenyourschoolworkandyourhobbies.Whynotjoininsomeoutdooractivitieswhenyoufeelbored?Asyourfriend,I’llbegladtoshareyourhappinessandsadness.Lookingforwardtoyourquickreply.Yours,LiHua
