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英语四级模拟作文例一：PartIWritingDirections:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessayentitledMaltingFriendsOnlineYoushouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.1.网上交友现象越来截止普遍。2.这种做法有利有弊。3.我的建议。答案：［高分作文］Withawidevarietyofvirtualcommunicationtoolsspringinguplikemushrooms,makingfriendsonlinehasbecomeincreasinglyfashionableoverthepastdecade.Thischannelofcommunicationenablespeopletogetacquaintedwithcyberfriendsfromanywherewithoutanylimitations,enrichingtheirlifeexperiencesandevenextendingtheirknowledge.What'smore,itisnotrareforsometofindtheirbosomfriendsandevenMr./Mrs.Right.Butasadouble-edgedsword,makingfriendswithoutphysicallymeetingeachotherundoubtedlyhasevils--tragediesoccurwhencyber-friendsfinallydecidetodate.Notcomingsinglybutinpairs,somespousesgetdivorcedbecauseonepartyfallsinlovewithcyber-lovers.Thenetworkrenderspeopleconvenientandefficientmeanstogetintouchwiththerestoftheworldandweshouldmakegooduseofitinsteadoffallingvictimstoit.［评析］这是一篇以分析某现象的利弊为主的说明文。第一段用一句话说明了随着各种各样的(awidevarietyof)虚拟通信工具如雨后春笋般涌现(springinguplikemushrooms)，网上交友在过去十年里(overthepastdecade)变得越来越(increasingly)流行。with引导的名词+doing结构是表示原因的经典用法。第二段用What'smore连接了两个好处。其中的亮点词汇有：enablepeopletogetacquaintedwith“使人们结识”；enrichingexperiences"丰富经验"和extendingknowledge"拓宽知识面"两个短语用了现在分词作伴随状语；itisnotrare表示“并不罕见"，比itiscommon更有力;bosomfriends"知心朋友"；Mr./Mrs.Right“另一半；心上人"。第三段话锋一转，利用比喻“就像一把双刃剑(asadouble-edgedsword)"，引出了坏处。成语Notcomingsinglybutinpairs"无独有偶"的前后讲了两个坏处，恰恰与前一段的两个好处形成对比。最后一段简洁地发出呼吁：网络给我们提供了便利、高效的接触外界的手段，我们应该好好利用它，而不应该成为其受害者。亮点词汇有：render,convenientandefficientmeans,fallvictimto。例二：Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessayentitOndConservingEnergy.YoushouldwriteatleastL20wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.1.能源短缺问题已经非常严重；2.可以采取节能措解决能源短缺问题；3.你的看法。答案：［高分作文］Nowadaysthereisgrowingconcernontheseriousproblemofenergyshortage.Manypeopleworrythatenergyresourcesontheearthwillbeexhaustedifweusetheminanuncheckedway.Andtheybelievethattheenergyshortagewillcauseseriousproblemsandevencrisis.Conservingenergyisoneofthemeasureswhichhavebeentakentosolvetheproblemofenergyshortage.Forexample,somecountrieshaveadaylightsavingsystemtouselesselectricityforlighting.Also,somecitieshaveenforcedsomefacilitiesforsavingwateratpublicplacessuchasrestroomsandbars.Stillmore,somehaveenforcedseriouspenaltiesonoveruseofelectricity,water,andfarmingland.Bythesemeans,peoplehopethedrainonenergyresourcescouldbesloweddown.Inaword,itishightimethatseriousconsiderationwasgiventoconservingenergy.Onlythroughimmediateandeffectiveaction,canwehumanbeingssurviveandenjoylifeasdesired.［评析］节能是当前备受关注的一个话题，因此可说的内容很多，紧紧围绕提纲要求进行阐述是本文的鲜明特点。文章首段直截了当地提出能源短缺这样一个话题，中间段概括说明节能是解决能源短缺问题的重要措施之一，运用并列型扩展法介绍了几种节能措施。末尾段重申主题，再次强调问题的紧迫性和严重性。本文词语和句型运用自如。如第二段的列举法虽然没有使用first,second等词语，但使用了Also,stillmo...