建议信是针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告的一种文体。1．写作攻略(1)建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告；(2)建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告；(3)建议信要写明写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要和缓。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。2．高分制造技巧(1)写作步骤首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌，使读者容易接受。(2)时态：一般为一般现在时；(3)人称：常为第一人称和第二人称。一、句式积累[好开头]1．I'msorryyou'rehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadviceintoconsideration.Herearesometipstohelpyou.2．Iamgladtoknowthatyouaregoingtoentercollegeanditismygreatpleasuretogiveyousomesuggestionsofchoosingyourmajor.3．Concerningyourrequest,Iwouldliketooffermyadviceonhowtokeepfit.中间段：Firstofall/Inthefirstplace/TobeginwithSecondly/Inthesecondplace/Besides=What'smore=AdditionallyLastbutnottheleast/Finallyandmostimportantly[好结尾]Idohopeyouwillfindmysuggestionsuseful.2．Idohopeyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoaccount.3.Onlyifyou...canyou...1.Ifinditnecessarytotakedownnoteswhilelistening.2.Whynottakeregularexercise,stopsmokingandeatmorefruitandvegetables?3.Itwouldbeagoodideaifyou...4.Bydoingthis,...5.Onlyinthiswaycanyoukeephealthy.二、范文观摩你(王伟)的好友(李磊)最近经常和一些朋友去网吧、游戏厅玩，有时甚至旷课。请你根据下面要点写一封信，对他进行劝诫。词数：120左右。1．朋友在人的一生中起着重要作用；2．真正的朋友不会让你去做坏事；3．所以我们要明辨是非，慎重交友。[经典范文]DearLiLei，IamwritingtoyoubecauseIthinkIhavesomethingreallyserioustocommunicatewithyou.InoticedthatrecentlyyouoftenwenttotheInternetBarandtheGameCentertogetherwithseveralfriends.Sometimes,youevendidn'thaveclassesinordertoplaywithyourfriends.Beingoneofyourbestfriends,I'mveryworriedaboutyou.Friendsplayanimportantpartinone'slife.Wehavetochooseourfriendscarefully.Realfriendswillneveraskustodosomethingwrong.Idon'tthinkthefriendsaroundyouareyourrealfriends.It'stimeforyoutothinkabouttheproblemImentionedabove.AndIdohopeyouwillmakeawisedecisionsoon.Yours，WangWei精彩再现1．具有一定的修辞意识：reallyserious;recently;carefully；above等。2．非谓语动词的准确使用：Beingoneofyourbestfriends;todosomethingwrong;tothinkabouttheproblem等。三、跟踪演练假设你是李华，你在美国的笔友Jack最近为被朋友误解所苦恼。请你根据所给提示，给他发一封120～150词的英语电子邮件对他进行开解。邮件内容包括：1．安慰Jack；2．你的建议。参考范文：DearJack，Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarebeingmisunderstoodbyyourfriendsthesedays.Icantotallyunderstandthepainyouareundergoing,whichmustbeabigchallengeforyou.Iknowyouarealwaysagoodfriend.Itisconsiderateofyoutohelpyourfriendsinmanyways.Iamsuretheremustbesomemisunderstandingbetweenyouandyourfriends.Youmustbeveryupsetnow.Annoyingasitis,Istillthinkyoushouldfacethesituationbravely.First,Isuggestyoutakesomemeasurestoreleaseyourpressure,forexample,youcandosomesportsandenjoysomenicemovies.Second,youneedtotalkwiththemfranklyandsincerelytoknowwhytheymisunderstoodyou.Therefore,youcanexplaintothemandmakeupyourfriendship.Ihopeeverythinggoessmoothlyandyoucanbegoodfriendsagain.Lookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.Yourssincerely，LiHua一、表达高级PK1．Hemadebrilliantremarksonthefamousfilm.→Theremarksthathemadeonthefamousfilmwasbrilliant.2．Hethoughtofanimportantwaytodealwithit.→Thewayhethoughtoftodealwithitwasofgreatimportance.(“高级”变中来：使用定语从句突出了brilliant和importance)二、提分句型：常用倒装句型()Ⅱ1．“notonly...butalso”引导并列分句，notonly位于句首时用倒装NotonlydoesthelittleboyspeakEnglishwell,butalsohespeaksFrenchfluently.这个小男孩不但英语讲得好，而且法语也说得很流利。2．“so...that”句型中的so位于句首时用倒装Soloudlydidhespeakthateveryoneintheroomheardhim.他说话声音那么大，房间里的人都听到他说的话了。3．so＋助动词＋主语WangPinglikesmusic,sodoeshisbrother.王平喜欢音乐，他弟弟也如此。
