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Howcanwewriteagoodcomposition(作文)?第一步：都要认真审题，明确写作体裁、要求和提示要点Howcanwewriteagoodcomposition?(Haveadiscussion!)具体做法：用笔勾画假如你是王林。你所在学校的“爱心俱乐部(HelpingHandsClub)”将吸收新会员。你想加入该俱乐部，请根据下面表格和图片的内容，用英语写一封自荐信。姓名王林性别男本人特点身体健康；学习刻苦；乐于助人；与同学友好相处“爱心”表现（见图片）加入目的1.…2.…1.要求：1.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；2.要点须包括表格和四幅图片中的信息，但不得使用真实姓名和校名等；3.表格中“加入目的”一栏内容由考生自拟；4.词数：70左右。(2006年南通市中考作文)第二步：列出写作提纲（Outline）。具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点不要遗漏要点！WriteanOutlineIntroductionMainbodyConclusion{{Iwanttojoin…本人特点“爱心”表现加入目的看表格看表格看图自拟Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.可以用英文或中文姓名/性别易漏掉的要点！自荐信Whatwillyouwrite？王林Whoareyouinthisletter?人称:IWhat’syourpurpose?加入该俱乐部时态：一般现在时为主Thinking:作文批阅（按中考标准）DearChairperson,IamaboystudentfromClass1Grade9.I’dliketojointheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iworkhardatmylessons.Ilikehelpingothers.Igetonwellwithmyclassmates.IfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends.AndIcanalsodomoreforothers.扣分原因一词数不够！DearChairperson,IamaboystudentfromClass1Grade9.I’dliketojointheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iworkhardatmylessons.Ilikehelpingothers.Igetonwellwithmyclassmates.IfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends.AndIcanalsodomoreforothers.Introduction本人特点加入目的扣分原因二遗漏要点！WriteanOutlineIntroductionMainbodyConclusion{{Iamaboy…I’dliketojoin…本人特点“爱心”表现加入目的Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.无法拿满分！DearChairperson,IamaboystudentfromClass1Grade9.I’dliketobeamemberoftheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iworkhardatmylessons.Ilikehelpingothers.IgetonwellwithmyclassmatesIfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends.Besides,Icandomoreforothers.YoursWangLin少了两个重要部分，扣5-6分，只得9-10分！缺少“爱心”表现也缺少Conclusion“爱心”表现(examples)Picture1help…with…helpclassmateswithlessons我的Ioftenhelpclassmateswithlessons.看图Picture2help…cross…“爱心”表现(examples)看图helpoldpeoplecrosstheroadIhelpoldpeoplecrosstheroadonmywayhome.Picture3“爱心”表现(examples)看图givemyseatto…givemyseattopeopleinneedIoftengivemyseattopeopleinneedonabus.“爱心”表现(examples)看图Picture4cleanuptheparkhelpcleanuptheparkIoftenhelpcleanupthepark.“爱心”表现(examples)1.Ioftenhelpclassmateswithlessons.2.Ihelpoldpeoplecrosstheroadonmywayhome.3.Ioftengivemyseattopeopleinneedonabus.4.Ioftenhelpcleanupthepark.ConclusionI’llbegladifIcanjointheclub.Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.DearChairperson,IamaboystudentfromClass1Grade9.I’dliketobeamemberoftheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iworkhardatmylessons.IlikehelpingothersIgetonwellwithmyclassmatesIfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends.Besides,Icandomoreforothers.YoursWangLinI’llbegladifIcanjointheclub.Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.andoftenhelpclassmateswiththeirlessons.Onmywayhome,Ioftenhelpoldpeoplecrosstheroad.Onabus,Ialwaysgivemyseattopeopleinneed.Sometimes,Ihelptocleanupthepark.不但要点完整了，词数也够了。写作：第一步就是要认真审题，明确写作体裁、要求和提示要点第二步就是要列出写作提纲，根据段落整理写作要点。写作前：确定人称、时态写作后：？DearChairperson,Iamaboystudentfromclass1Grade9.I’dlikebeamemberoftheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iw...