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HowtopolishourwritingsurpriseBrainstormWhat'sasurprise?Asurpriseistheastonishmentyoufeelwhensomethingtotallyunexpectedhappenstoyou.surpriseBrainstormWhat'sasurprise?我们生活中充满了惊喜，也许是你的一位好朋友，因为一件事或者一个改变给了你惊喜，也许是一次前往陌生城市的旅行，带给你不一样的惊喜，又或者，当你读到一本好书，看到一部精彩的电影，因为作品的与众不同使你惊喜不已，请你结合自己的生活经历，和大家分享一下属于你的惊喜。I.Examinethetopic(审题)_________gavemeabigsurprise一位好朋友一个改变一次一本好书一部精彩的电影一件事前往陌生城市的旅行一位好朋友一件事myfathermygrandmothermyteacher..._________gavemeabigsurpriseI.Examinethetopic(审题)一本好书一个改变一部精彩的电影一次前往陌生城市的旅行doingsth.sb.sth.sb./(doing)sth.JudgeifthetitlesareproperMymothergavemeabigsurpriseBeijinggavemeabigsurpriseAfilmgavemeabigsurpriseI.Examinethetopic(审题)MyhardworkinggavemeabigsurpriseShanghaigavemeabigsurpriseHelpothersgavemeabigsurpriseAtriptoBeijing...Myhardwork...AtriptotheBund...Helpingothers...Tip1:Thetitleshouldbegrammaticallyright.（题目无语法错误）I.Examinethetopic(审题)_________gavemeabigsurprise1.Choosethetypeofthetext.A.Narrativewriting（记叙文）B.Argumentativewriting（议论文）C.Practicalwriting（应用文）D.Expositorywriting（说明文）2.Choosethepropertense.A.Simplepresenttense（一般现在时）B.Simplepasttense（一般过去时）C.Simplefuturetense（一般将来时）Tip2:Determinethetypeofthetext(文体)andusethepropertense.Tip3:Coverthefiveelements.______gavemeabigsurpriseWhoWhereWhenII.Maketheoutline(建立框架)WhathappenedNarrativewritingbeginningbodyendingHow“I”felt(What“I”learned)abigsurprise1.IpaidavisittoYuGarden.Weate,weplayedandhadfun.2.Myfriendgavemeasurprisingbirthdaypresent----myfavoritebook.3.IsawafilmcalledWonder.Theherowaslaughedatforhisuglyface.However,hewasnotsadandmademorefriendsatlast.Ishouldnotjudgeapersonbyhisappearance.4.IsawthefilmWonder.Iwassurprisedatthehero'sstrongwillanddetermination.Hewasnotashamedofhisuglyfaceorafraidofothers'laughter.III.Task1:chooseproperwritingmaterials5.Iwasnotgoodatmaths,butonceIgotahighmarkevenhigherthanmyfriendwhowasgoodatit.Thissurprisedme.Ilearneditwasmyhardworkthatmademesucceed.6.Duringtherunningrace,Ifeltexhaustedandwantedtogiveup.MyfriendsaroundencouragedmeandIfinallycrossedthelineandwontherace.7.MyfriendSusanishelpfulandfriendly.Shealsoworkshard.Shemakesmesurprised.III.ChooseproperwritingmaterialsAbigsurpriseAItwasmybirthdaylastMonday.MyfriendSandygavemeapresent----oneofmyfavoritebooks.WhenIsawit,Iwasveryexcited.Whatabigsurpriseshegaveme!III.Task2:readandcompareBOnthemorningofmy12thbirthday,nobodysaidhappybirthdaytome.IfeltverysadbecauseIthoughttheyforgotmybirthday.WhenIreturnedhomeintheevening,abirthdaycakewaswaitingforme.Iwassomoved.Whatabigsurprise!III.ChoosewritingmaterialsB.Onthemorningofmy12thbirthday,nobodysaidhappybirthdaytome.IfeltverysadbecauseIthoughttheyforgotmybirthday.WhenIreturnedhomeintheevening,abirthdaycakewaswaitingforme.Iwassomoved.Whatabigsurprise!1.Whathappenedfirst?Nobodysaidhappybirthdaytohim.2.Howdidhefeel?Why?Hefeltsadbecausehethoughttheyforgothisbirthday.3.Whathappenednext?Abirthdaycakewaswaitingforhim.4.Howdidhefeel?Hefeltmoved.asurprisingbodychangeoffeelingsTip4:Designasurprisingbodywiththechangeof“my”feelings.ＴｈｅＰａｒｔＯｎｅTips:1.Arighttitle2.PropertypeoftextandtenseWhatweshoulddoI.Examinethetopic.I...