Howtopolishthesentences如何润色句子金沙中学刘关会Inthisclass,wewill:practicepolishingsentencesbyusingfivemethods.learntoworkwithothers.arousetheloveforgreatpeopleandsetourselvesarightexample.NelsonMandelaRound1Correcting5mistakesNelsonMandelawasborninJuly18,1918.HecomesfromasmallregioninSouthAfrica.Itisaverypoorcountry.Hisfatherwasachiefofatribe.HehadagreatinfluenceonlittleMandela.HemadeMandeladreamofequality,freedomandjustice.Fortunately,Mandelawasjustattheageof9.Hisfatherdiedfromanillness.Hefeltveryupset.Thenhewasbroughtupbyoneofhisfather’sgoodfriends.Thefriendtreatedhimashisownson.HeofferedMandelaagoodeducation.Mandelalivedinastage.Agreatnumberoflawspreventedtheirrightsandprogress.Hemadeuphermindtostudyhard.Laterheturnedintoalawyer.Hewasexcellent.Hebecamequitepopularamongblackpeople.Inordertofightagainstthegovernmentbetter,hesetupANCYouthLeague.Hefailedmanytimesinthishardcareer.Eventually,hedecidedtoanswerviolencewithviolence.In1962,hewassentencingtoprison.Therehedidn’tabandonhisbelief.Hewassetfreeafter27years.Mandelapersistedinwinning.Hecametopoweraspresidentin1994.AlsohewasrewardedwiththeNobelPeacePrize.HeiscalledthefatherofSouthAfrica.Round2PracticepolishingthesentencesWorkwithyourpartners,pickoutsomesentencesandtrytopolishtheminthefiveways.Round3Let’smakeaconclusion1.并列句sentenceAsentenceBand,but,or,so,notonly...butalso...either...or,neither...nor...Thefriend_________treatedhimashisownson,_________offeredMandelaagoodeducation.notonlybutalso2.状语从句when,while,before,after,because,if,sothat,though,although...sentenceAsentenceB_________hefailedmanytimesinthishardcareer,hedecidedtoanswerviolencewithviolence.Because3.定语从句who,whom,which,that,whose,where,when,why...sentenceA名词/代词Hisfather,_________hadagreatinfluenceonlittleMandela,wasachiefofatribe.who4.非谓语做定语/状语doingdonetodo名词动词主动/进行被动/完成即将/目的_________(make)uphismindtostudyhard,heturnedintoalawyerlater.MakingNelsonMandela,_________(bore)onJuly18,1918,comesfromasmallregioninSouthAfrica.born5.特殊句式(强调句/倒装句)Itis/was+被强调部分+that+句子剩余部分so...that,only+状语,notonly...butalso...,never/seldom...,notuntil...强调句的基本句型：倒装句类型：NelsonMandela,bornonJuly18,1918,comesfromasmallregioninSouthAfrica.Itisaverypoorcountry.Hisfather,whohadagreatinfluenceonlittleMandela,wasachiefofatribe.HemadeMandeladreamofequality,freedomandjustice.Unfortunately,Mandelawasjustattheageof9.hisfatherdiedofanillness.Hefeltveryupset.Thenhewasbroughtupbyoneofhisfather’sgoodfriends.NotonlydidthefriendtreathimashisownsonbutalsoheofferedMandelaagoodeducation.Mandelalivedinastage.Agreatnumberoflawspreventedtheirrightsandprogress.Makinguphismindtostudyhard,heturnedintoalawyerlater.Hewasexcellent.Hebecamequitepopularamongblackpeople.Inordertofightagainstthegovernmentbetter,hesetupANCYouthLeague.Becausehefailedmanytimesinthishardcareer,hedecidedtoanswerviolencewithviolenceeventually.In1962,hewassentencedtoprison.Therehedidn’tabandonhisbelief.Hewassetfreeafter27years.Mandelapersistedinwinning.Hecametopoweraspresidentin1994andalsohewasrewardedwiththeNobelPeacePrize.HeiscalledthefatherofSouthAfrica.Round4Describeoneofyourclassmates,thenwe’llguesswhoyouarewriting.AquotefromMandelaAfterclimbingagreathill,oneonlyfindsthattherearemanymorehillstoclimb.Pleasewritethecompositionafterclassandtrytopolishyoursentencesafterfinishing.Practicemakesperfect!Round5HomeworkTherightchoosetodothehomeworkornot.
