2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼（三）一：原文重现Peter,a5-year-oldboy,showedsuchgreatinterestinseashellsthathewouldrushtopickthemupwithhis3-year-oldsister,Shirley.TheyscreamedouttheirjoyasPetercollectedhistreasureintohispockets.ForPeter,seashellslayshinningonthepeacefulbeach,waitingforhim,justlikestarstwinkling（闪烁）inthesky.Aswavestouchedthem,theyseemedtobeflowersblooming（绽放）ingentlewind.Oneday,PeterwaswanderingthroughmarketwithShirley,withsomeshellsinhispocket.SuddenlyPeterfoundhisyoungersisterwaslagging（落后）behind.Hestoppedandlookedback,findingShirleywasstandinginfrontofatoyshopandwasstaringatsomethingwithgreatinterest.Theboywentbacktoherandasked,“Whatdoyouwant?”Shirleypointedatthedoll,wearingasmileonherinnocentface.Peterheldhisyoungersister'stinyhand,walkingintotheshop.Hetiptoed（踮起脚尖）toreachforthedoll,andlikearesponsibleelderbrother,gavethepreciousdolltoShirley.Holdingtightlythedoll,thesisterwasveryveryhappy.Theshopkeeperwaswatchingeverythingandgettingamusedtoseethematured（成熟的）behavioroftheboy.Nowtheboycametothecounterandaskedtheshopkeeper,“Howmuchdoesthisdollcost,Sir?”Theshopkeeperwasacoolman,whohadsufferedfromsomethinginhislife.Soheaskedtheboywithloveandaffection,“Well,whatcanyoupay?”Peterreachedintohisclothesformoneythatwasintendedforthesetwolittleguys'breakfast.Havingcountedthemoney,Peterputitcarefullyonthecounter,askingagain,“Sir,isitenoughformylittlesister'sdoll?”Theamusingscenejustinfrontoftheshopkeepereventuallybroughtasmileonhisface.Shakinghisheadslightly,hereplied,“Myboy,Iamafraiditseemsnottobeenough.”1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好：Paragraph1:WithhiseyesfixedonPeter'spocket,hewonderedwhatPeterwoulddo.Paragraph2:SeeingPeterleavinghappilywithhissisterholdingthedolltightly,anassistantinthatshopgotsurprised.二：文本解析【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了5岁的Peter和3岁的妹妹Shirley捡了一些贝壳，这些贝壳对Peter来说很珍贵。一天,他们闲逛时，Shirley被玩具店里的洋娃娃吸引了，Peter把洋娃娃拿给了Shirley，并前去付钱。老板看着这一切，感到有趣之余还想看看Peter在钱不够的情况下是否愿意舍弃他喜爱的贝壳。最后，好心的老板只收了Peter两个贝壳。1.段落续写：①.由第一段首句内容“他的眼睛盯着Peter的口袋，想知道Peter会做什么。”可知，第一段可描写Peter下定决心拿出来口袋里所有的贝壳，老板只收了他两个贝壳。②.由第二段首句内容“看到Peter高兴地和紧紧抱着洋娃娃的妹妹离开，店里的一个员工感到很惊讶。”可知，第二段可描写Peter和妹妹离开，店员感到很惊讶，老板解释了原因。2•续写线索：Peter犹豫一一拿出贝壳一一老板退钱一一兄妹离开一一店员惊讶一一老板解释。3.词汇激活行为类①.下决心：makeupone'smind/makeadecision②.买：buy/purchase情绪类①.高兴地：happily/joyfully/gladly②.惊讶的：shocked/surprised/amazed高分句型1.Hetookoutalltheshellsfromhispocket,givingthemtotheshopkeeper,whotookthemandstartedtocountasifhehadbeencountingthemoney.（由关系代词who引导非限制性定语从句和由连接词asif引导的虚拟句）2.Peterputthoseshellsbackintohispocketveryhappily,leavingwithShirleyholdingthedolltightly.（由现在分词作状语）3.Whenhegrowsup,hewillrememberhepurchasedadollforhissisterwiththeshellsfromashopkeeper.（由连接词when引导时间状语从句）三：续写单句训练1.他的眼睛盯着彼得的口袋，不知道彼得会怎么办。2.看着雪莉的微笑渐渐消失，彼得皱起了眉头。3.过了一会儿，他似乎下定了主意。4.他从口袋里掏出所有的贝壳，交给店主，店主拿来，开始数，好像他在数钱似的。5....
