书面表达专题讲解1.深入学习书面表达评分标准2.考试书面表达讲解剖析3.优秀佳作赏析2014.102014高考陕西卷英语考试说明书面表达评分标准第二档：（7-12分）分数档内容要点语言应用语言错误连贯流畅30-25覆盖所有要点陈述充分不同的丰富语法结构和词汇个别错误复杂语法高级词汇有效使用连接成分结构紧凑24-19覆盖所有要点陈述较充分语汇能满足写作任务的要求些许错较复杂语法常用词汇应用简单连接成分比较紧凑18-13覆盖部分要点陈述欠充分语汇能满足写作的一般要求一些错误一般语法基本词汇应用简单连接成分基本连贯12-7未写清要点含少量无关信息语法结构单调词汇知识有限不少错误影响理解连接成分少内容缺少连贯性6-1明显遗漏要点很多无关信息语法结构和词汇错误较多，影响对写作内容的理解仅个别句子短语可读内容不连贯0未能传达给读者有效信息：内容太少，无法评判；写作内容与题目无关，或无法看清2014高考陕西卷英语考试说明书面表达评分标准评分标准写作中注意的问题内容要点齐全完备语言词汇丰富高档句子词语准确无误全文内容连贯紧凑卷面整洁字迹工整书面表达（满分30分）你班将举行一次以“WhoIwanttothankmost”为题目的主题班会。请你根据下面的写作要点写一篇发言稿。写作要点：1.谁是你最想感谢的人；2.举例说明原因；3.表达你对他/她的感谢与祝福。注意：1.词数120左右；2.内容充实，结构完整，要点齐全；3.书写清晰、公整。1.文体_________2.时态_________3.人称_________4.要点审题和构思感谢的人感谢原因你的祝福第一人称一般现在、一般过去应用文三点：感谢的一般表达thank;thanks;gratitude;grateful/thankful;appreciate1.____________youallforyourhelpandencouragement.2.____________foryourhelpandencouragement.3.I_____________yourhelpverymuch.4.I’d____________itifyoucouldacceptmyinvitation.5.I’dliketo________myteachersandfriends.6.I’dliketoexpressmy___________________tomyteachersandfriends.7.Iam__________tomyteachersforhelpingme.8.Iwantto_______myteachersandfriends.9.________alotforyourhelpThankThanksappreciateappreciatethankthanks/gratitudegrateful/thankfulthankThanks话有三说巧说为妙例1.Iwanttothankourteachers.(一般表达)I’liketoexpressmythankstoourteachersI’liketoexpresssincerethankstoourteachersfromthebottomofmyheart.Onbehalfofallthestudents,I’liketoexpresssincerethankstoourteachersfromthebottomofmyheart.Representingallthestudents,I’liketoexpresssincerethankstoourteachersfromthebottomofmyheart.A1A2A3A4例2.YouhelpedmewhenIwasintrouble.(一般表达)YougavemeahandwhenIwasintrouble.YoualwaysgavemeahandwheneverIwasintrouble.ItisyouthatalwaysgavemeahandwheneverIwasintrouble.YouarealwaystheonewhogavemeahandwheneverIwasintrouble.YouarealwaysthefirstonewhogavemecomfortandencouragementeverytimeIwasintrouble.YouarealwaysthefirstonewhogavemecomfortandencouragementeverytimeIwasintrouble.Butforyourhelp,Icouldneverhavemadesomuchprogress.Salutation,Everyone/Ladiesandgentlemen!①Itisagreathonorformetostandhereandgivemyspeech(,mynameis________).Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis"________".②③Tobeginwith,manypeoplesuggestthat___________.Secondly,__________.④Thirdly,____________.⑤⑥WhatIwanttostressisthat________.Foronething,_______________________.⑦Foranother,_______.Besides,________.⑧⑨Inaword,_________.⑩⑪Thankyouforyourlistening!黄金模板发言稿、致辞、演讲稿问候和称呼①礼貌开始，表达自己的心情并自我介绍②点明演讲/致辞/发言稿的主旨/主题③演讲/致辞/发言稿的内容要点一(或以一两句话简述主题）④演讲/致辞/发言稿的内容要点二⑤演讲/致辞/发言稿的内容要点三(视提纲而定）⑥过渡句，承上启下，引出个人观点或看法⑦个人观点或看法一⑧个人观点或看法二⑨个人观点或看法三（视提纲而定）⑩总结全文，重申观点⑪礼貌结束语
