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UnitUnit77Mylifein20Mylifein20years.years.No.4MiddleSchoolZhaoWeiweiNo.4MiddleSchoolZhaoWeiweiLet’swatchviedos.1.Doyoulikethelifeinthevideos?2.Whyorwhynot?3.Isthelifethesameasyours?Somequestions3aDeadJill’sanswertothequestion“Whatwillyourlifebelikeinthefuture?”Fillintheblankswiththewordsinthebox.3aDeadJill’sanswertothequestion“Whatwillyourlifebelikeinthefuture?”Fillintheblankswiththewordsinthebox.meetworklivelookkeepwearmorelessfewertakemeetworklivelookkeepwearmorelessfewertakeIn20years,IthinkI’llbeanewspaperreporter.I’ll_______inShanghai,becausetherewillbe_______jobsinthatcity.Asareporter,IthinkIwill_______lotsofinterestingpeople,soI’llhavemorefriends.livemoremeetI’llhave_______pets,though,becauseI’llhave_______freetime.Andmyapartmentwillbenogoodforpetsbecauseit’llbetoosmall.SoI’llprobablyjust____abird.Duringtheweek,I’ll____smartclothes.Ontheweekend,I’ll____lesssmartbutI’llbemorecomfortable.Inthefuture,peoplewill____moresothey’llprobablyhavefewervacations,butIthinkI’ll_______aholidayinHongkongwhenpossible.OnedayI’llevengotoAustralia.fewerlesskeepwearworktakelookneighborhoodjobfreetimeactivitieshousefamilyMylifein20years…Let’stalkaboutthelifein20years.freetimeactivitiesfreetimeactivitiesneighborhoodneighborhood……Doyouhavesomegoodideasorgoodexpressions?Doyouhavesomegoodideasorgoodexpressions?DiscussionTopicPamerimaginationJobHouseFamilyFreetimeactivitiesNeighborhood...Giveareportaboutyourjobs/houses/families…Giveareportaboutyourjobs/houses/families…endingThethingsweshouddonow.Mylifein20yearsStructure+Youcanchoosethreeorfour...……A6-stararticleAssessment:Howmanystarscanitget?Allaboutthetopic(围绕主题)Goodstructure(结构合理)Richexpression(丰富表达)Conjunctions&associatedwords(使用连词和关联词)Correctspelling(拼写正确)Goodhandwriting(书写优美)UsefulsentencesFirstofall…I’mgoingtobea...,beauseI….SoIwill…Iwillhavea…house,and…Ilove...,soIwillhave...everyday.AndIwill…with…Inmyfreetime,Iwill…BecauseIlike…/Iamgoodat…Therewillbe...inmyneighborhood.Iwill…Thisis...Whataboutyours?Inaword…That’sall.…In20years,IthinkIwill_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Writeaboutyourlife20yearsfromnow.UsefulsentencesFirstofall…I’mgoingtobea...,beauseI….SoIwill…Iwillhavea…house,and…Ilove...,soIwillhave...everyday.AndIwill…with…Inmyfreetime,Iwill…BecauseIlike…/Iamgoodat…Therewillbe...inmyneighborhood.Iwill…Thisis...Whataboutyours?Inaword…That’sall.…Assessment:Howmanystarscanyouget?Allaboutthetopic(围绕主题)Goodstructure(结构合理)Richexpression(丰富表达)Conjunctions&associatedwords(使用连词和关联词)Correctspelling(拼写正确)Goodhandwriting(书写优美)CorrectionCorrectionLovemylifeLovemyworkLovemyfamilyLovemyselfHaveadream,Pleaseworkhardandtryyourbest!LovemylifeLovemyworkLovemyfamilyLovemyselfHaveadream,Pleaseworkhardandtryyourbest!1.Self-edityourownwritingaccordingtothewritingevaluationtable.依据写作评价表对自己的文章进行自评。2.Afterself-editing,reviseyourdrafts.自评完成后对草稿有针对性地加以修改。Homework