书面表达专练主讲人何海霞Training(1)1.得知你二月份要来北京我很高兴。I’msogladtolearnthatyou’recomingtoBeijinginFebruary.2.我已经为你找到了地方。I’vefoundaplaceforyou.3.房间面积50平方米,带有卧室,洗澡间和厨房。It’saflatof50squaremeters,withabedroom,aabathroomandakitchen.4.卧室里备有床,沙发,书桌和椅子。Inthebedroomthereisabed,asofa,adeskandachair.Training(2)5.月租三百。Therentis300yuanpermonth.6.公寓在长安大街的一幢楼房中,离光明中学不远。TheflatisinabuildingonChang’anStreet,whichnotfarfromGuangmingMiddleSchool.7.一路车可以直接带你到校。事实上,只有两站路。BusNo.1cantakeyoustraighttotheschool.Infact,it’sonlytwostops.8.如果不满意,我可以给你另找地方。Ifyouarenotsatisfiedwithit,Icantryandfindanotherplaceforyou.PossibleVersion(3)DearBob,I’msogladtolearnthatyou’recominginSeptember.I’vefoundaplaceforyou.It’sasmallflatof25squaremeters,withabedroom,abathroomandakitchen.Inthebedroomthereisabed,asofa,adeskandachair.Therentis500yuanpermonth.TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarawayfromJianxinChineseSchool.ButNo.11cantakeyoustraighttotheschool.Infact,it’sonlyonestop.Doyouthinkyou’dlikeit?Ifnot,Icantryandfindanotherplaceforyou.Justletmeknow.Yours,LiHuaVersions(4)DearBob,ImaisLihua,IcomefromChina,welcomeyoutodichins.ImaschoolisinfanChaohere.IlivephthefanChao.Theyshareonestreet.YoutodoIschoolsunterChinese,youfanChaomovedinandgavetheIschool.Ihaveyouthehomehavea25.500money30days.Theyshareonestreet.Asmallairportandafewoftelevisionperday.Yours,Lihua0分Versions(5)DearBob,Howareyou?Ireceivedyourletterandveryhappy.Youpleasemehelpyouarom,whichIwasfound.WithyoustermbertoourcityJianxinhuawenschooltostudyChinese.TheroomontheFangcaostret,enaryouschoolanext.Theroomisthreeflood.Haveabedroom,aKitchenandtoilt.Thebedroomhasabedandthedeskfoyourstudy,Behind,Kitchenandtoiltsavd,worktheChilt.I’mveryhappyyoucanChinesestudy.Thebestwishtoyou!Yours,LiHua1-5分Versions(6)DearBob,Ihearthatyouwillgotomyschooltostudyinsep.I’mveryhappytoheardit.Andyouaskedmetofoundahousehearlythe“JianxingHuwenMiddleSchool”,Ihavefoundit,it’sintheFangChaoroad.Youcantakea11busarrivedthere.Now,Itellyousomethingaboutthehouse.Thehouserentwillcostyou500Yuaneverymonthes,thehousehas25killmiterslarge,hasthreeroms,suchas,bedrom,chitherroomandbothroom,theroomisveryclean,hasachair,atableandalight,allofthemarenewone.Inaword,it’sberygreat,ithinkyouarelikeit.Last,I’mlookingforwardyouandyouallthingsbest!Yours,LiHua6-10分Versions(7)DearBob,Ialreadyfoundaflatfryou.ItisontheFangchaoStreetwherenearJianxinChineseschool.ThenextbusstopofFangchaoStreetisJianxinChineseschool.Iwilltellyousomeinformationabouttheflat.Therearefourrooms,includingalivingroom,bathroomandakitchen.Inlivingroom,youwilluseasofa,abedandadesk.Andtherearethreedoorstothebathroom,kitchenandoutsideflat.AllofaboveistheflatwhichIfoundforyou.Thehouseownersaidtherentcanbediscussedifyouwanttolivein.I’mlookforwardtoyourletter.Yours,LiHua11-15分Versions(8)DearBob,I’mverygladtohearfromyouandI’mveryhappytoseeyouinSeptember.IknowyouwillstudyinJianXinChinesesschol,soIhavealreadyfoundacomfortablehousenearthisschoolforyou.Infrontofthehouse,thereisabusstationandtheNo.11buswilltakeyoutotheschoolwhereyouwillstudy.Inthehouse,youwillfeelverycomfortable.Init’sthebiggestroom,therehaveabed,asofa,adeskandsoon.Thehousealsohasatoiletandakitchen.Ithinkyouwillhaveagoodtimeinit.Atlast,thehouseisnottoobigandtherentis500permonth.Iwillwaitforyouinthecity!Yours,LiHua16-20分Consolidation(9)DearBob,HowgladIwaswhenIheardthatyouwouldcometoJianXinChineseschooltostudyChinese.I’vefoundahouse,whichyou’vementionedinyourlastletter.Aswasexpected,it’sneartheschoolwhereyou’llstudy.Asamatteroffact,it’sbythesideoftheroadwhereliestheNo.11busstopandtheschoolisatthenextstop.Letmetellyousomethingindetailsaboutthehouse.Foronething,it’slargeenoughforasinglepersonlikeyoutolivein.Foranother,it’swellequipped.Besidesasofa,adeskwithachairandabed,therearealsoawashroomandakitchen.It’s25squaremeterswiththerentofonly500yuaneachweek.Itneveroccurredtomethatyouwouldcometostudywithme.I’mlookingforwardtoyourcomingsoon.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua21-25分