范文讲评：旅游事业「要求」要求：旅游事业对我国具有举足轻重的作用。请以WaystoImproveChina’sTourism为题为我国旅游事业的发展提几点建议。（提示：扩大宣传，改善旅游设施，提高服务质量……）「范文」WaystoImprovechina’stourismTourismisnowbecomingamajorindustrythroughouttheworld.However，tourisminChinaisnotasdevelopedasitshouldbe.Ifthefollowingisdone，China’stourismwilldefinitelybeimproved.First，ourplacesofinterestshouldbebetteradvertisedthroughouttheworldtoattractmoretourists.Second，facilitiesshouldbeprovidedtoensurethattouristsenjoytheirtrip.Finally，thequalityofserviceshouldbeimproved.Don’ttellpeopletheirideasarebadunlessyou’vegotagoodone.「评语」本文第一段提出问题，第二段解决问题，“first”，“second”，“finally”等词的使用，使整篇文章条理格外清晰。范文讲评：如何利用空余时间「要求」题目：你将参加校园英语讲演比赛。现在需要写出一份简要的底稿，底稿应包含以下基本要点。随着工作时间的缩短，空余时间越来越多了。如何利用空余时间。利用空余时间的益处。题目自拟。「范文」UseofFreeTimeSomepeoplemaybesobusythattheyneverhaveasparemoment，butitwouldbehardtofindsuchpeopleincontemporarytimes.Workinghoursareshorterandvacationslonger，andtherearemoreandmorewaystospendtheweekends.Asidefromeatingandsleeping，whatdopeopledoduringthemanyhourswhentheyarenotatworkoratschool？Useoffreetimeoftendisclosesmuchaboutone’stastes，values，interestsandpersonality.Whatmaybeoneman’sleisure，however，mightbeanotherman’swork.Inleisurehours，somemayturntothehumanities：literature，magic，artandherewemightalsomentionmoviesandtelevision.Othersparticipateinsports，politics，voluntaryworkorhobbiesathome.Stillotherslikeparties，travelling，orjustloafing.Obviously，theuseoffreetimeisagoodmeansofrelaxation，butitsbenefitsgobeyondthis.Allthingspeopledoinleisurehoursenablethemtogratifytheirwishes.Thiscancontributetointellectualgrowthandpromotesocialactivitiesaswell.Sothegooduseoffreetimewillmakeliferich，colorfulandrewarding.「评语」这篇文章写得很有水平。说理深入浅出，语言丰富晓畅，例证详实，句式灵活多变，使得文章生动并吸引人。开篇用问句，引出下文；结尾点题，总结全文。并且很有文学性。范文讲评：旅行「要求」暑假就要到了，许多同学都会选择旅游作为度假的一种方式。的确，旅游对一个人的身心健康颇有好处。那么就请你以下面三句话分别作为三段段首的主题句，写一篇旅游的文章。Travelisaverygoodmeansofbroadeningaperson’sperspective.Travelmayrelieveapersonofboredomandgloom.Travelerscanchoosedifferentmodesoftransportationwhichhaveadvantagesanddisadvantages.「范文」TravelTravelisaverygoodmeansofbroadeningaperson’sperspective.Itmakesyoucomeintocontactwithdifferentcultures，meetpeopleofdifferentcolorsandgothroughpeculiarritesandceremonies.Travellingmuch，youwillnotonlyenrichyourknowledgeandexperiences，butalsobeawareofthevastnessofnature.Travelmayalsorelievepersonofboredomandgloom.Travelbringsyouenjoymentandattraction.Itgivesyouapleasantexperience，whichwilldisperseyourboredomandmakeyouforgetwhateverannoysyou.Travelbroadensyourmindandleavesyougoodmemories.Later，youmaygooverthesememoriesandenjoyyourpastexperiences，thuskeepingafreshandsunnymind.Thefield’shisstudy，naturewashisbook.Travelerscanchoosedifferentmodesoftransportationwhichhaveadvantagesanddisadvantages.Airplanesarethefastestbutalsothemostexpensive.Busesandtrainsarelessexpensive，buttheysoonmakeyoufeelcrampedanduncomfortable.Shipsprovideyouwithcomfortunlessyougetseasick.Mo...
