基础写作训练课基础写作训练课::对比型调查、讨论对比型调查、讨论结果结果基础写作训练课基础写作训练课::对比型调查、讨论对比型调查、讨论结果结果Ourclassconducted____heateddiscussionlastFridayconcerningtheissueofwhatgiftsweshouldgivetoourclassmatesandfriendsandtheresultsareasfollows.Sixtypercentofourclassmatessay____theywouldratherbuygiftsfromashop,maintainingthatsuchgiftsaredelicate,prettyandproperforgiving._______,theothersprefertomakethegiftsby__________,__________(believe)thatthiscanconveytheirsincerity_______(well).athatHoweverthemselvesbelievingbetterWhat’smore,___thiswaytheycancultivatetheirabilitiestodothingsthemselvesandreusesomematerialstomakegifts,______canstrengthentheirawarenessofsaving.FromwhereIstand,Ihaveapreferencetomakegiftsbymyself_______itnotonlyconveysmysincerefeelingsbutalso______(give)auniquepresenttomyfriends.whichinbecausegives你们班同学上周五就“应该送什么样的礼物给同学或朋友”的话题展开了讨论,下面是讨论记录:【写作内容】请根据以上信息写一篇短文,内容包括:1.讨论的时间和话题;2.同学们的意见和话题;3.你的看法。【写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯……你的看法自己制作的礼物能更好地表达真挚情感,还能培养动手能力,增强节约意识自己制作的礼物好40%的同学商店的礼物精致、美观、适合赠送到商店买的礼物好60%的同学理由什么样的礼物好比例调查、讨论结果类型基础写作你们班同学上周五就“应该送什么样的礼物给同学或朋友”的话题展开了讨论,下面是讨论记录:【写作内容】请根据以上信息写一篇短文,内容包括:1.讨论的时间和话题;2.同学们的意见和话题;3.你的看法。【写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯……你的看法自己制作的礼物能更好地表达真挚情感,还能培养动手能力,增强节约意识自己制作的礼物好40%的同学商店的礼物精致、美观、适合赠送到商店买的礼物好60%的同学理由什么样的礼物好比例•观察范文,思考:1.5句话如何安排(篇章结构)2.句子的时态差异OurclassconductedaheateddiscussionlastFridayconcerningtheissusewhatgiftsweshouldgivetoourclassmatesandfriendsandtheresultsareasfollows.Sixtypercentofourclassmatessaythattheywouldratherbuygiftsfromashop,maintainingthatsuchgiftsaredelicate,prettyandproperforgiving.However,theothersprefertomakethegiftsbythemselves,believingthatthiscanconveytheirsinceritybetter.What’smore,inthiswaytheycancultivatetheirabilitiestodothingsthemselvesandreusesomematerialstomakegifts,whichcanstrengthentheirawarenessofsaving.FromwhereIstand,Ihaveapreferencetomakegiftsbymyselfbecauseitnotonlyconveysmysincerefeelingsbutalsogivesauniquepresenttomyfriends.调查、讨论结果类基础写作特点篇章结构此类写作一般是基于某个调查、讨论、问卷或社会话题展开,因此表达的句子主要涉及_____、_____、_____,所以我们要根据事件发生的时间决定句子的时态(通常使用____________)撰写调研研究和辩论、讨论的结果,发表议论和个人观点,句子通常使用_____________。文章背景(1句)意见和理由1意见和理由2自我的观点(4句)时间人物话题一般过去时态一般现在时态OurclassconductedaheateddiscussionlastFridayconcerningtheissusewhatgiftsweshouldgivetoourclassmatesandfriendsandtheresultsareasfollows.Sixtypercentofourclassmatessaythattheywouldratherbuygiftsfromashop,maintainingthatsuchgiftsaredelicate,prettyandproperforgiving.However,theothersprefertomakethegiftsbythemselves,believingthatthiscanconveytheirsinceritybetter.What’smore,inthiswaytheycancultivatetheirabilitiestodothingsthemselvesandreusesomematerialstomakegifts...