短文改错练习假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每句不超过两个错误；2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；3.只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。（1）Irespectmyfatherandhealwaysgivesmeadviceandhelpmetomakebestdecision.Hehasexperiencedalotofthing.Afterhegraduatedfromcollege,heworkedasasecretary.However,hefoundthejobwasbored,sohedecidedtoquitthejobandtravelledtomanyplaces,whathelpedhimbroadenhishorizon.whenhewentbackhome,hefoundajobhelikes.IwassointerestedinhislifeexperiencesthatIcouldn’thelpthinkwhatitmightbelikeifItravelledlikehim.Iwouldmademanyfriends.Iwantalifelikemyfather.Whenthetimecomes,andIwilltraveltoo.（2）Iwasahighschoolstudentthen,fromthelow-incomefamily.SoIhavetosupportmyfamily.Myfirstonejobwastocleanthetablesinasmallrestaurant.Istillremembergoingthereearlyandfeltanxiousaboutthenewworld.IworkedharderbecauseIwasafraidoflosingthejob.Atnight,Iwassometimesverytiredtodomyhomework.ButIcametounderstandthatwasnoteasytoearnmoney,andthatknowledgescouldchangemylife.SowhatIlearnedfromthejob,inahardway,wasmuchmoreimportantaswhatIlearnedfromschool.（3）AtChristmasEve,JimwentwithhisfathertochooseaChristmastree.Theychooseabigone.Itwasalmostastallerastheroom!Theyputtheminthecornerofthesittingroom.JimwascovereditwithalotofChristmaslight.Thesittingroomlookedreallybeautifullyatthemoment.Therewasafireburninginthefireplace,buttheChristmastreelightswereshinningbrightly.Jimandhisparentssinginganddancinghappily.（4）Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoesinourbackgarden.Sincethen—foralltheseyear—wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!（5）Zhinu,thegranddaughteroftheGoddessofHeaven,visitedtheearth.Whileshewasonearth,hemettheherdboy,Niulangandtheyfellinlove.Theygetmarriedsecretly,andtheywereveryhappy.WhentheGoddessofHeavenknewthatZhinuwasmarriedwithahuman,shebecameveryangrilyandmadetheweavinggirlreturntoHeaven.Niulangtriedtofollowher,buttheMilkyWaystoppedhim.FindthatZhinuwassad,hergrandmotherfinallyhaddecidedtoletthecouplescrosstheMilkyWaytomeetonceayear.Magpiesmakeabridgeoftheirwingsbutthecouplecanmeetonaseventhdayoftheseventhlunarmonth.Peoplehopethattheweatherwillbefineonthatday,becauseitisraining,itmeansthatZhinuisweepingandthecouplewon’tbeabletomeet.
