Unit3Tomorrow’sWorldguidedwritingWritingaproposal【写作要求】本单元的写作要求是Writingaproposal。【情景呈现】假定你是某国际学校的高一学生李华。请你用英语给外籍校长写一封信，就你在使用学校图书馆时遇到的问题提出建议，并说明理由。要点包括：1.开放时间较短，建议延长时间；2.灯光较弱，建议配置台灯；3.书籍较旧，建议购置新书并推出电子图书馆。注意：1.词数150左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：安装install；过时的outdatedDearsir,IamLiHua,astudentfromGrade1.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【写作分析】根据写作内容可知，我们的写作任务是写一封建议信。建议信是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告，并说明理由，以便让对方接受自己的想法或主张，从而解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人，就某个问题提出自己的看法或观点；也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。根据题目要求，信的主体可以分为三个部分：第一，表明写作意图；第二，针对你在图书馆使用过程中遇到的问题提出具体的改进建议；第三，希望对方接受自己的建议。此类写作的主要目的是提出建议，观点要合情合理，且语气一定要得当，既要委婉礼貌，又要有说服力。【参考范文】Dearsir,IamLiHua,astudentfromGrade1.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewconcerningthelibraryserviceinourschool.IcameacrosssomeproblemswhileusingthelibraryandI’dliketomakesomesuggestions.Firstofall,thelibraryclosesearly.Itmightbeagoodideaforthelibrarytostayopenlonger,especiallyonweekends.Second,thelightinthereadingroomisnotbrightenough.Itwouldbebetteriftablelampscouldbeinstalled.Studentscanusethelampswhennecessary.Third,Ifindthatthebooksinourlibraryarealittleoutdated.Isuggestwebuymorenewbooksandmagazinessothatstudentscangetthelatestinformationabouttheworld.Lastbutnotleast,Isuggestanelectroniclibrarybedevelopedsowecanhavealotmorereadingmaterial.Ireallyhopeyouwillthinkmysuggestionsusefulandtakethemintoconsideration.Yourssincerely,LiHua【必背佳句】1.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewconcerningthelibraryserviceinourschool.2.Itmightbeagoodideaforthelibrarytostayopenlonger,especiallyonweekends.3.Itwouldbebetteriftablelampscouldbeinstalled.4.Isuggestwebuymorenewbooksandmagazinessothatstudentscangetthelatestinformationabouttheworld.5.Ireallyhopeyouwillthinkmysuggestionsusefulandtakethemintoconsideration.【举一反三】假定你是李华，是一名高一学生。为了更好地为学生们服务，你校英文校报现向全体学生征求编写意见。请你根据以下要点用英语写一封信，向校英文报编辑反映你发现的问题，并提出自己的改进办法。1.文章多以校内事务为主，建议增加关于时事或学习方法的文章；2.版面形式不够活泼，建议增加新板块，用来展示学生自己的作品等。注意：1.词数150左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：时事currentaffair；展示displayDeareditor,IamLiHua,astudentfromGrade1.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHuaOnepossibleversion:Deareditor,IamLiHua,astudentfromGrade1.IamwritingtotellyousomeproblemsIhavefoundwhilereadingourschoolnewspaperaswellasmysuggestions.Ihavereadmanyarticlesintheschoolnewspaper.Ifindthatalmostalltheessaysintheschoolnewspaperareaboutthedailyroutinesinourschool.Itisgoodforustoknowaboutthingsthathappeninourschool,butIthinkitwouldbebetterifthereweresomearticlesaboutcurrentaffairsandlearningmethods.Readingcurrentaffairscanopenstudents’eyessotheycangettoknowmoreabouttheworld.Sharinglearningmethodscanhelpstudentsfindthebestwaytostudyeffectively.Furthermore,Ithinktheformofthenewspapercanbelivelier.Ithinkitisagoodideatoopenanewsectiontodisplaystudents’ownworks,suchaspaintingsandphotos.Iwouldbemorethanhappyifmysuggestionscouldbeconsidered.Yourssincerely,LiHua
