CommunicationWorkshopTeachingAim:Learntoattractstheattentionofthereader,showstheorderofevents,sharesfeelingswiththereader,usevividlanguagetomakethewritingmoreinterestingwhenwritingacomposition
Teachingprocedures:Ⅰ
WarmupUsethefollowinggivenwordstomakeupashortstory:bus,wait,walk,hot,teacher,remind,competition,prepare,last,tearⅡ
ReadingTask1:Readthethreedraftsofastudent’scompositiononthetopicADayWhenEverythingWentWrong
Decidewhichoneisthemostinteresting
Thinkabouthowthewriter:●attractstheattentionofthereader
●showstheorderofevents
●sharesfeelingswiththereader
●usesvividlanguagetomakethewritingmoreinteresting
HowthewriterattractstheattentionofthereaderMay24thwasabadday
Thedayeverythingwentwrongwasmay24th
May24th,2005willliveinmymindforever
HowthewritershowstheorderofeventsBecausetheschoolbusd