基础写作--人物篇•基础写作提示：•基础写作首先定位文篇时态•人物传记(生平)的时态应为过去时•人物描写技巧:•1.概况（尽量用同位语或分词结构，使文章简洁，通顺)如；•1)XXXwasbornintoa…family(家庭）in…(地点）on…（时间）.•2）Bornin…onNov.7，1867,XXXisagreat….(过去分词作状语/定语)•3)XXX,thesonofapoorfamily,wasbornin...on….(同位语）•EgEg:1.AbrahamLincon,:1.AbrahamLincon,thesonofapoorfathesonofapoorfamilymily,wasborninKentuckyonFebruary12,,wasborninKentuckyonFebruary12,1809.1809.•2.2.BornBorninMaryland,USAininMaryland,USAin19851985,Michael,MichaelPhelpsisafamousswimmer.Phelpsisafamousswimmer.•一月：January简写Jan.•二月：February简写Feb.•三月：March简写Mar.•四月：April简写Apr.•五月：May简写May.•六月：June简写Jun.七月：July简写Jul.八月：August简写Aug.九月：September简写Sep./Sept.十月：October简写Oct.十一月：November简写Nov.十二月：December简写Dec.•钱学森于1911年12月11日出生于浙江杭州一个富裕之家,他是我国航天事业（Astronomyindustry）的先驱.•QuanXuesenwasborninawealthyfamilyinHangzhou,ZhejiangonDecember11,1911andhewasthepioneerofChina’sAstronomyindustry.(并列句)•QuanXuesen,thepioneerofChina’sAstronomyindustry,wasborninawealthyfamilyinHangzhou,ZhejiangonDecember11,1911.(同位语)•QuanXuesen,whowasborninawealthyfamilyinHangzhou,ZhejiangonDecember11,1911,wasthepioneerofChina’sAstronomyindustry.(定语从句)•QuanXuesen,borninawealthyfamilyinHuangzhou,ZhejiangonDecember11,1911,wasthepioneerofChina’sAstronomyindustry.(非谓语作定语)2.【介绍年龄:】•1.17岁的女孩:a17-year-oldgirl,agirlofseventeen,•2.在17岁时:attheageof17,aged17B.外貌,性格(巧用with做定语)如:1)XXXis18yearsold.Heisabout1.74metrestallandweighs65kilograms.2)XXXisa…personwithaheightof1.64metresandaweightof48kilograms.3)XXXisagood-lookingwomanwithlonghairandbigeyes.4)Inadditiontobeingconfident,sheisalsoattractiveandsensitive.easy-going随和的energetic精力充沛的generous慷慨的honest诚实的humorous幽默的independent独立的determined有毅力的cautious谨慎的talkative善谈的attractive有吸引力的healthy健康的patient耐心的warm-hearted热心的modest谦虚的outstanding杰出的considerate考虑周到的optimistic乐观的enthusiastic热情的4.Educationbackground.4.Educationbackground.beadmittedto….university(beadmittedto….university(考取…大学考取…大学))graduatefrom…departmentof…universitygraduatefrom…departmentof…university((从某大学某系毕业从某大学某系毕业))gainscholarshipgainscholarship获得奖学金获得奖学金getgoodgradesgetgoodgrades获得好成绩获得好成绩get/receiveabachelor/master/get/receiveabachelor/master/doctor’sdegreedoctor’sdegree获取学士获取学士//硕士硕士//博士学位博士学位主修…主修….majorin….majorin…教育经历(注意尽量用非谓语动词,使文章精炼)如；•1）MajoringinScience,hegraduatedfromOxfordUniversity,andthenhewentabroadforfurtherstudies.•2）HavinggraduatedfromOxfordUniversity,hewenttoAmericaforfurthereducationandreceivedadoctor'sdegree.•3)Aftergraduating…5.Bigeventsinone’slife(inorderoftime)5.Bigeventsinone’slife(inorderoftime)workas….workas….从事…工作从事…工作choosesthashis/hercareerchoosesthashis/hercareer选择……作为职业选择……作为职业breaktheworldrecordof…breaktheworldrecordof…打破……的世界纪录打破……的世界纪录beelectedto….beelectedto….当选……当选……begiventhetitleof...begiventhetitleof...获得……称号获得……称号gain/winthefirstprize/place/championgain/winthefirstprize/place/champion获得一等奖获得一等奖//...
