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1.Asamiddleschoolstudent,Ithinkthatnecessarytobuildagoodrelationshipwithourteachers,foritistheteacherswhoshowloveandconcernforourstudentsinstudyandlife.Westudentscanalwaysseeksupportandadvicesfromthem.Theygiveusagreathelp.Forthiscase,anidealrelationshipbetweenteachersorstudentsisveryimportant.Inmyopinion,thisrelationshipshouldbeonefillingwithlove,care,understandingandrespectsowecanexchangeideasfree.Tobuildarelationshiplikethis,teachersshouldbecomeourfriendswhenwestudentsoughttotrustteachersandexpressourfeelingsfrankly.Onlybyjointeffortscanwewillenjoyawarmrelationshipwithteachers,andlivehappyandharmoniouslife.2.DearMum,Howareyou?I'vegotagoodnewstotellyou.IhaveofferedajobatacompanyinAmericanasmygoodperformance.Aboutonethousandgraduatestooktheexamforit,butonlyafewwaschosenandIwasoneofthem.However,mygirl-friendisnothappyaboutit.Sheisstrongagainstmygoingthere.Shesaysitistoofarawaythatshewon'tseemeforalltheyearandsheisafraidIwouldfeellonely.Shecan'timaginemelivealone.SheadvisesmetoworkinShanghaiinstead.ThenI'llbeabletocontinuelivingforher.HowcanIpersuadehertoletmeworkabroad?Canyougivesomeadvices?BestWishes.Yours,LiHua3.DearLiHua,It'stimetosaygoodbyeandIreallytreasurethosebeautifuldayswespendtogether.Youaretheverypersongivesmeahandwhennecessary.YouarethemostconsideratepersonwhoknowsexactwhatIneed.Doyoustillrememberthatnighttwoyearsbefore?WhileIsuddenlyfellill,anditwasyouwhocarriedmeonyourbacktoanearbyhospital.YoutookgoodcareofmewhileIwashavingainjection.Later,youmanagedtohelpmewithmylessons.Withyourhelp,Iwouldhavefailedintheexamination.Istillhavehundredofstoriestosharewithyou.Mayourfriendshiplastedtilltheendoftheuniverse!Yours,WangPing