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高考书面表达练与评在我国，交通事故频频发生。你班就这个话题展开了讨论。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇短文。字数：100左右。事故后果：财产损失、人员伤亡……事故原因：违反交通法规，超速驾驶、酒后驾车……措施或建议：加强教育，增强安全意识……题目分析：一、审题：此篇作文是一篇典型的指导性作文，文章要点明确，包括：1、后果2、原因3、措施或建议。前提有两点，1、中国的交通事故发生频繁。2、在班级内讨论此问题。根据要点，这篇文章可分为三段。第一段提出话题，第二段陈述后果和原因，第三段谈措施或建议。基本时态应是一般现在时。二、根据要点初步确定本文可能涉及词语：property,death,injury,breaklawandregulations,speeding,drivingafterdrinking,raise,awarenessofsafety,等。习作评析习作1InChina,trafficaccidentshappenfrequently，whichhaveabadeffectonthewholesociety.Trafficaccidentsnotonlygetagreatmanypeopleinjuredorkilled,butalsoresultinpropertyloss.Thebreakingoftrafficlawandregulationsiscitedasmajorfactorscausingtheincreasingnumberoftrafficaccidents,suchasspeedinganddrivingafterdrinkingalcohol.Thekeytotrafficsafetyiseducation.Ifweimproveoursafetyawarenessandenlargeourknowledgeoftrafficlawandregulations,I'mfirmlyconvincedthattrafficaccidentscouldbereducedandavoided.InChina,trafficaccidentshappenfrequently，whichhaveabadeffectonthewholesociety.have应改为has。因为which指代的是前面的整个句子Thebreakingoftrafficlawandregulationsiscitedasmajorfactorscausingtheincreasingnumberoftrafficaccidents,suchasspeedinganddrivingafterdrinkingalcohol.Trafficaccidentsareincreasingasmorepeoplebreakthetrafficlawandregulation.Speedinganddrivingafterdrinkingaremajorproblems.习作2TrafficaccidentsinChinaaretoday'smostfrequentkiller,sofarasthepublicareconcerned.Manyfamiliessufferendlesspainbecausetheirfamilymembersaredisabledorevenkilledinaccidents.Thegreatlossinpropertyandspiritwilllastalongtimeastheirnightmares.Carelessdriversaretoblameformosttrafficaccidents.Theyalwaysbreakthetrafficlawandregulations,drivingtoofastorafterdrinkingalcohol.Inordertoavoidtrafficaccidents,peopleshouldgetagoodknowledgeoftrafficregulationsandbuildupasenseofself-protection.Onlythenwillwebeabletoenjoyasaferlife.Thegreatlossinpropertyandspiritwilllastalongtimeastheirnightmares.Thefinancialandspirituallossinvolvedcanbecomearealnightmare.习作3TrafficaccidentshavebecomeasfamiliarasthecommoncoldinChina.Soweheldaheateddiscussiononit.Weallsharetheopinionthatthecauseofaccidentsismainlyduetocarelessdrivers,whodon'tfollowthetrafficlawsastheyoughtto.Couldyouimaginewhatwillbewaitingforaheavydrinkerifhedriveshiscarontheroad?Theinjuriesandpossibledeathswillteachhimanunforgetfullesson,letalonethecompensationtobepaid.Itisobvioustousthatcrowdedroadsandpeopleignoringtrafficrulesleadtotrafficaccidentsaswell.Inconclusion,wesuggestthatpeopleshouldmakesenseoftrafficlawandregulationsandstrengthentheirsenseofsafetyinordertoallowbothtrafficandtheirlivestomovesmoothlyandsafely.Theinjuriesandpossibledeathswillteachhimanunforgetfullesson.unforgetful这个词不存在，应改成unforgettable练你班将要举办一次主题为"WhatcanwedofortheOlympics?"的英语演讲比赛。请写一篇英语演讲稿，从以下四个话题中任选一至二个阐述，说明。1.举止文明2.学好英语3.当奥运志愿者4.向国际友人宣传中国文化词数：150词左右【写作指导】动笔之前要首先审题，如本命题要求说明为奥运会做些什么，重点应该阐述我们应该做什么以及理由。命题中给出了四个话题，有的同学常常把命题要求翻译一遍就完了，这样是不可取的。写作时，应该有轻有重，要突...