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Manyparentsoflower-gradeprimaryschoolstudentsareconcernedaboutwhethertheirchildrenwillgetusedtostudy,astheirnoonnap(午睡）habitscanhardlybecarriedoutinaclassroom,affectingtheirafternoonperformance.ButtheHangzhouDanfengExperimentalPrimarySchoolinEastChina‘sZhejiangprovincehasreassured(使…安心)parentsasitprepares12"sleepingrooms"foreachfirstandsecond-gradeclass,aswellaspillowsandblanketsforeachstudent,theQianjiangEveningNewsreports.TheHangzhouDanfengExperimentalPrimarySchoolofferssleepingroomswithblanketsandblanketsforfirstandsecond-gradestudents.①本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。②评分时，先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求去来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。③词数少于40的和多于80的，从总分中减去2分。④评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑...⑤拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。⑥如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。1知己知彼，百战不殆④评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；上下文的连贯性；对各要点表达的独立性情况。档次描述第五档(21-25)—理解准确，涵盖全部要点。—能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。—有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑。—完全使用自己的语言。Problemsreflected:1.画蛇添足加标题，如“gettingridofdirtornot?”2.文章没理解，写的摘要偏离主题。3.文章结构没把握好，主题句或要点没找准。4.不知道如何筛选重点，去细节。5.照搬原句，没有用自己的话转述。6.没必要分段。7.妄加自己的观点或评论。8.文体和原文不符。如有的同学以拟人手法写。9.字数过多。10.句子独立，无关联词衔接。11.转述的句子结构和语言错误多。2Problemsreflected:1.画蛇添足加标题，如“gettingridofdirtornot?”2.文章没理解，写的摘要偏离主题。3.文章结构没把握好，主题句或要点没找准。4.不知道如何筛选重点，去细节。5.照搬原句，没有用自己的话转述。6.没必要分段。7.妄加自己的观点或评论。8.文体和原文不符。如有的同学以拟人手法写。9.字数过多。10.句子独立，无关联词衔接。11.转述的句子结构和语言错误多。2Howtowriteagoodsummary?1.Readforthestructure结构andgenregenre:expositorywriting说明文（一般结构：总述＋分说）Howmanypartscanthispassagedividedinto?Inwhatorderisthepassagewritten?Whichwordisrepeatedlymentioned?2.Readfortopicsentencesorkeywords.Gettingridofdirt,intheopinionofmostpeople,isagoodthing.However,thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.SodidthekingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath,thekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.Thoughthebeliefinthemeritofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWar.AdvertisementsrepeatedlyⅡselltheidea;clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar?Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,...