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从“契诃夫法则”看读后续写隐藏线索的利用契诃夫（Chekhov），19世纪末俄国伟大的批判现实主义作家，情趣隽永、文笔犀利的幽默讽刺大师，短篇小说之王，著名戏剧作家。他创作态度严谨，重视文学的写生，笔下一草一木无不栩栩如生，刻画心理亦往往入木三分，是世界短篇小说巅峰之一，并成为短篇小说的代名词。Chekhov1860-1904Chekhov’sLaw契诃夫法则是一种文学技巧，在故事早期出现的某一元素，直至最后才显现出它的重要性。换言之，在故事开头出现过的物品一定要在后面的故事情节中用到，否则，它就不应该出现。“契诃夫法则”对读后续写的启示•1.故事前面隐藏的线索为故事后续的发展指明了方向；•2.在阅读故事时应重视隐藏的线索；•3.隐藏的线索在后续的故事发展中应有所交代。课例（读后续写讲评课）CookieThiefItwaslateandrainingheavilyonenight.Ayoungwomanwaswaitingforherflightatanairport.ShewasleavingforLondonbecauseshegotanewjobthere.ItwassaidthathernewbosswasatypicalEnglishgentleman—polite,modest,humorousandconsiderate.Shewasexcitedaswellasalittlenervousabouthernewlife.Withseverallonghoursbeforeherflight,thewomanhuntedforabookintheairportshops,boughtapacketofcookiesandfoundaplacetosit.Shetookoutabookandstartedtoread.Althoughshewasabsorbedinherbook,shehappenedtoseethatthemansittingbesideher,asboldashecouldbe,grabbedacookieortwofromthebaginbetweenthem.Educatedtobewell-mannered,shetriedtoignoreittoavoidanargument.Buttoshowthatshewastheowner,shestartedtotakecookiesfromthatbagtoo.Unfortunately,themandidn’tgetthathint（暗示）,sincehedidn’tstopgrabbingthecookies.“Howannoying!”Shethought.Asthegreedycookiethiefkepteating,thewomanmunched(用力咀嚼)somecookiesandwatchedtheclock.Shewasgettingangrierastheminuteswentby,thinking,“IfIweren'tsonice,Iwouldblackenhiseyes.”Witheachcookieshetook,hetookone,too;whenonlyonewasleft,shewonderedwhathewoulddo.Withasmileonhisface,andanervouslaugh,hetookthelastcookieandbrokeitinhalf.Heofferedherahalf,andatetheother.Shegrabbeditfromhim,glaredathimandthought,“Oh,brother.Thisguyhassomenerveandheissorude!Whyhedidn'tevenshowanygratefulness?”Shehadneverknownwhenshehadbeensoangry,andsighedinreliefwhenherflightwascalled.Shegatheredherbelongingsandheadedtothegatequickly,refusingtolookbackattherudethief.Sheboardedtheplane,sankinherseat,andlookedforherbook,whichwasalmostcomplete.1.huntforabook:searchforabook2.bold-bolder-boldest:大胆的，敢于冒险的3.grabvt/vi-bb-抓住，攫取grabsth(fromsb/sth):seizegrabholdofme/myarms：抓住我/我的胳膊grabatsth：抓住，利用（机会）4.getthathint=takea/thehint:领会某人的暗示5.munch/mʌntʃ/~(on/at)sth大声咀嚼6.blackenhiseyes：打肿他的眼睛blackensb’sname/reputation:玷污某人的名声5.break/cut/tearsthinhalf:把某物分成/切成/撕成两半6.sighinrelief：letoutasighofrelief=breatheinrelief7.headtothegate:走向登机口=beheaded〔朝…〕前进，〔向…〕去:[+for/towards/backetc]TheshipwasheadingforCuba.船正驶向古巴。It'sabouttimewewereheadinghome.我们该起身回家了。headnorth/southetcWeheadedsouthtowardsthecapital.我们朝南向首都进发。Whereareyouguysheaded?你们要去哪儿？8.sinkinherseat[I]倒下;颓然坐下〔尤因非常疲倦或虚弱〕:[+into/to/down/backetc]Sheletoutagroanandsankintoachair.她呻吟了一声，颓然倒进椅子里。gentleman；thewoman;apacketofcookies;theman;cookiethief;anervouslaugh;ate;thought;rude;theplane人物事物动作特性gentleman;thewoman;theman;cookiethiefapacketofcookie;anervouslaugh;theplaneate;thoughtrudeWhichunderlinedwordswillyouchoose?Why?Dividetheunderlinedwordsinto4groups:•Theunderlinedwor...