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读后续写的具体要求提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。(2016年10月浙江高考试题)(1)OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway.(2)Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturned示例around,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.(3)“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”(4)Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.(5)Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.(6)Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.____________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.__________________________________________________________注意一、所续写短文的词数应为150左右（词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分）；二、应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语，少用1个扣1分，少用2个扣2分，少用3到4个扣3分；三、续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语，少划1个不扣分，少划2个到3个扣1分，少划4个扣2分。sortoutthetenwordswhowherenounsaction/verbmoods/adjTom,Janestream,lake,atadistanceyellowblouse,helicopterwalked,climbedtohergreatjoyStep1：AnalyzetheoriginalmaterialTheplotoforiginalarticlequarrelled——walkedaway——gotlost——savedherself——missedherhusband——savedherselfagain——helicopterappearedandflewaway……Step1：Analyzetheoriginalmaterial2.Readandpayattentiontothefeelingofthecharacterindifferentparagraphs.Para1:Para2-4:Para5:Para6:angryfearful,regretful,tired,helplesshappy,strongerhopefulBeginningClimaxEndingquarrel吵架，生气离开看见直升飞机angry(helicopters)rescued?被救？Processlost迷路fearful,regretful，tired,hopelesshopefulABattractiveboringWhichkindofplot（情节）isbetter?Discussingpositive（积极的）negative（消极的）Whichkindofendingdoyouperfer?Welookedateachother,cryingandsmiling.Wewerebothangryanddecidedtotravelseparately.Discussing细读两段续写的开头语，理顺续写段落的逻辑关系；围绕划定的10个关键词，合理创新故事情节。Par...