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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Istoodunderthemistletoe(槲寄生).Thegreen,leafyclusters(团，簇)spottedwithwaxy-whiteberrieshungfromthebranchesofeveryappletree.That'sthesamestufftheysellinthestoresforChristmasdecorations,Isaidtomyself.Whycan'tIsellmistletoetoo?ItwouldbeaperfectwaytoearnmoneytobuyaChristmasgiftformybrother,Derek.Itookafewstepsback,ran,leaped,andreachedashighasIcould.Butthelowestmistletoeclusterwastoohigh.Frustrated,Ihadstartedforhome,whensomethingstrangecaughtmyeye.Attheedgeoftheappleorchard(果园),onetreestoodbare.Allthemistletoehadfallenoffthebranches.Delighted,Icarefullypickedoutthebestclustersandputtheminmylunchbox.Whenitwasfull,Irushedacrossthecornfieldtogohome.Ienteredthedoor,listening.Yes,aguitarwasplaying.Ipoundedonthedoor.Theguitarstopped.Amomentlaterthedoorwasopen.Mybrotherstoodtherewearinghisbrownleatherjacket.“Whereareyougoing?”Iasked.“Noneofyourbusiness,”hemurmured,sailingpastme.Itwasn'teasysharingthatsmallbedroomwithmyolderbrother.WithDerekoutoftheroom,Iemptiedthecontentsofmylunchboxontomybed.AsIlookedforsomethingtoputthemistletoein,IsawDerek'sguitaronhisbed,wrappedinanoldtowel.ThatguitarwastheonlybeautifulthingDerekowned,andIknewwhattobuywiththemistletoemoney:acaseforthatguitar.EvenifDerekwasbad-temperedsometimes,heisstillmybrother,andIlovedhim.ObviouslyIneededmoremistletoe.Thenextday,Icutthroughtheappleorchardagain.Asurpriseawaitedme---twomoretreeswerebareandmoremistletoe!Icameacrosstheorchardsownerwhosaidhepaidaguytocutallthatmistletoeoutofhisappletrees.HewashappyIcollectedthemistletoe.AsIracedforhome,IsawDerek,inhisleatherjacket,wascrossingthecornfield.Butheignoredme.ThatnightIpickedmoremistletoe.Withallmistletoesoldout,Ihurriedovertothemusicstore.Inthefrontdisplaywindowlayarowofwoodenrecorders.Ihadlearnedtoplayaplasticoneatschool,andIwantedoneofthosewoodenones.EachyearthatwasatthetopofmyChristmaslist.Buteachyeartherewasn'tenoughmoney.Tip1:Trytolearnmoreaboutthecross-culturalcommunicationandputyourselfintoothers'shoes.古代北欧神话中，和平之神伯德(Balder)被邪恶之神罗奇(Loki)以槲寄生所制成的箭射死，槲寄生是世上唯一可以伤害伯德的东西。伯德的母亲---爱神傅丽佳(Frigga)得知后痛不欲生，于是她和众神想尽办法挽救伯德的生命，最后终于救活了他。傅丽佳非常感激，因此承诺无论谁站在槲寄生下，便赐给那个人一个亲吻，于是造成圣诞节槲寄生下的亲吻习俗。而且也将槲寄生象征的涵义、爱、和平与宽恕永远保存下来，这三者也是圣诞节的精神本质。注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用至少5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。Paragraph1：IwascalculatinghowmuchmoremoneyI'dneedtobuyarecorderwhenIsawthetowersofguitarcasesinthebackofthestore.__________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Ireachedtheorchardagain,overhearingafamiliarvoicetalkingwiththeorchardowner.______________________________________________AnalysisoftheTextLiteraryGenreNarrative(记叙文)ThewholestoryissetinthedaysbeforeChristmas,duringwhichpeoplearebusypreparinggiftstotheirfamilyandfriends.SynopsisChristmasisapproaching.Iwanttobuyacaseformyolderbrother'sguitarbysellingmistletoe.ButhoweverhardIworked,Istillhavenotenoughmomey.Therefore,IcomebacktothegardentopickupmoremistletoewhenIoverhearafamiliarvoicetalkingwiththeorchardowner.Tip2:Ananalysisofthefeaturesofmaincharactersh...