英语书面表达EnglishCompositionWriting全国高中英语教师群190624773Whatmakesagoodessay?TheessayAgoodessayisusuallymadeupofatopicparagraph,somesupportingparagraphsandaconcludingparagraph.TopicparagraphSupportingParagraph1SupportingParagraph2SupportingParagraph3ConcludingparagraphTomanystudents,schoollifeisboringandtiring.However,Ifindmyschoollifemeaningfulandcolourful.generalstatementtopicstatementTopicparagraph(Introductionparagraph)GeneralstatementTopicstatementSupportingParagraphs(Body)ParagraphsTSSSSSSSSSFirstly,...Secondly,...Moreover,...Finally,...However,...Inaddition,…Furthermore,...ConclusionPersonally,…inconclusion,inbrief,Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaydrawtheconclusionthat...Insummary,itiswiser...TheparagraphWhatmakesagoodparagraph?Agoodparagraphisonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences.Therearedifferentkindsofbee.Someliveinlargegroupslikethehoneybee,andmaketheirnestsintreesorholesintherocks.Otherspeciesmaketheirnestsinholesintheground.Therearealsovarietiesthatdonotliveingroupsatall…topicsentencetopicsentenceWhereveryougoinourschool,youseegreenlawnsandtreesandbeautifulflowers.Dottedamongthesetreesandflowersaremanybuildingsofdifferentstyles.Astreamrunsthroughourschoolandyoualwaysseeeverythingreflectedinthewater.Topicsentence:________________justlikeagarden.Ourschoolisjustlikeagarden.Ourschoolisjustlikeagarden.OurschoolisAgoodparagraphisone\thatcontainsproperlinkingwords.IbelieveEnglishismoreimportantthanotherforeignlanguagesformanyreasons.Firstofall,Englishisspokenbyalargenumberofpeople,andthesepeoplearethemostwidelyspreadacrosstheworldinagreatmanycountries.Secondly,Englishisthemostwidelyusedlanguageontheinternet.Ithasbecomeanon-linelanguage.Thirdly,the2008OlympicGameswillbeheldinourcountryandEnglishwillbeveryuseful.Lastly,…正确使用有关连接词时间先后：转折关系：but,however,onthecontrary,nevertheless因果关系：because,since,as,thanksto,owingto,asaresultof,forthereasonthat让步关系：though,although,evenif,eventhough,inspiteofthefactthat递进关系：条件关系：表列举：表总结：what’smore,inaddition,furthermoreontheonehand…ontheotherhand,if,unless,aslongas,onconditionthat…forexample/instance,take…forexample,that’stosay,inotherwords,asfollowsinshort,inbrief,inconclusion,inaword,onthewhole,ashasbeenstatedfirst,then,later,intheend,eventually,sincethen,afterawhile丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。e.g.Whatakindboyheis!Howdisappointedhewas!感叹句强调句e.g.Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.Agoodparagraphisonewithvariedsentencepatterns.e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.Therecomesthepolicecar.Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhentheymettheyoungman.e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Cometomeifnecessary.e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.倒装句省略句with短语e.g.Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation.Let’scometothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.定语从句e.g.That’swhatIshoulddo.Weshoulddoafavourtowhoeverneedshelpatpresent.各种名词性从句e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.Themomentwereachedthefarm,wegotdowntoharvesting.Solongasweworkharderatourlessons,we’llcatchupsoonerorlater.各种状语从句应用了较多的词汇这里所说的“词汇”，可以从高级词汇的使用、同义词的使用、短语的使用等方面去理解：（...
