中考写作指导（traditionalfestivals）学案Step1学习范文theSpringFestival（范文）TheSpringFestivalisthebiggestandtraditionalfestivalinChina.ItusuallycomesinJanuaryorFebruary.It’stimetoringouttheoldyearandgetnew.Peopleusuallybuynewclothesforchildrenandthemselves.Wealsocleanourhousescarefullybeforeitcomes.Atthesametime,weputupchunlianonthedoorsandchuanghuaonthewindows.It’stimetogettogether.Everyonegoeshometogettogether,thoughsomeoneisfarawayfromhome.Themostimportantispeoplemusthaveabigdinnertogether.It’sinterestingandexcitingforustoshootofffireworkstocelebratethenewyear.Besides,wemustvisitrelativesandfriendsandsay“HappyNewYear”tothem.What’smore,childrenoftengetluckymoneyfromtheirelders.Theyfeelveryhappy.TheSpringFestivalistimetoringouttheoldyearandgetnew.It’stimetogettogetherandgivethebestwishestoourrelativesandfriends.It’scheerfultime.Step2写作技巧十二字秘诀：结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点+书写1）结构（见范文）2）要点（见范文）3）．正确使用连接词1.表示并列或递进:and,aswellas,both…and...,notonly…butalso...2.表示选择:or,either…or...3.表示转折:but,however,though,afterall4.表示因果:because,so5.表示条件:if,6.表示列举:forexample,forinstance,suchas,like7.表示顺序:First,...Second,...Third,...Firstly,...Secondly,...Thirdly,...Firstofall,...Then,...Next,...Finally,...8.表示强调:also,besides,what’smore,infact9.表示结论:Inaword,...10.个人总结：Inmyopinion,...Ithink...4）语法改错。1.ItusuallycomeinJanuaryorFebruary.2.It’stimetoringouttheoldyearandgetsnew.3.weonthedoorsputedupchunlian.4.Everyoneisgohometogettogether.5.weshootofffireworksisinterestingandexciting6.Ibest/veryliketheSpringFestival.7.Theyarefeelveryhappy5）亮点及常用句型：1.TheSpringFestivalisthebiggestandtraditionalfestivalinChina.2.ItusuallycomesinJanuary/February/March/April/May/June/July/August/September/October/November/December/spring/summer/autumn/winteronMay1st/thesecondSundayinMay/August15thoftheChineselunarcalendar(农历)/…3.It’stimeto…(ringouttheoldyearandgetnew).4.Peopleusuallydo…Wealso…5.Itisinteresting/exciting/…forusto…6.Everyonegoeshometogettogetherwiththeirfamilythoughsomeoneisfarawayfromhome.7.…(activity1).What’smore/Besides/Inaddition,…(activity2).8.ItisourdutytorespectthetraditionsandmakeChinesecultureknowntotheworld.6）书写工整美观Step3写作练习：假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Maria对中国的传统节日中秋节很感兴趣，希望你给她写封信介绍中秋节。信中应包含以下要点：1.中秋节是中国重要的传统节日之一；2.中秋节的时间是每年的农历八月十五（August15thoftheChineselunarcalendar(农历)；3.人们在中秋节吃月饼，赏月并把祝福送给亲人和朋友；4.自己对中秋节的认识与节日的意义。注意：1.词数：80词左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.覆盖所有要点；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。DearMaria,I’mveryhappythatyouareinterestedinChineseculture,especiallythefestivals.NowLetmetellyousomethingabouttheMiddleAutumnFestival._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________-____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaStep4展和评短文通顺完整，能包含所有要点，表达清楚流畅，语言基本无误。9-10分短文较通顺完整，表达基本清楚，语言有少量错误。7-8分能写明基本要点，短文不够通顺完整，语言有较多错误，但表达尚能达意。5-6分仅能写明部分要点，短文不完整，语言有较多错误，影响意思表达。3-4分仅能写出与文章有关的单词或短语。0-2分
