看图作文看图作文高考作文评分细目高考作文评分细目1.对内容的要求全面2.对句式的要求多样3.对词汇的要求丰富4.对语篇的要求流畅，顺畅的连接和转折5.对书写的要求正确，工整6.对目的的要求符合写作要求1.1.下面下面44幅图片描述的是星期天上午在中幅图片描述的是星期天上午在中山公园里发生的一件事。请根据图片所提山公园里发生的一件事。请根据图片所提供的信息用英语为你校的“英语园地”写供的信息用英语为你校的“英语园地”写一篇短文。一篇短文。注意：①短文须包括所有图片的主要内容。注意：①短文须包括所有图片的主要内容。短文的内容要连贯、完整；短文的内容要连贯、完整；②②短文单词数：短文单词数：100100左右（已给句子中的左右（已给句子中的单词不计入总词数）；单词不计入总词数）；③③参考词汇：货摊参考词汇：货摊stand(stand(n.n.););抢夺抢夺snatcsnatch(h(v.v.););逮捕逮捕arrest(arrest(v.v.))例文内容要点：1.公园，冰淇淋货摊旁,年轻妇女的包被抢2.人们追赶抢包者,3.长排椅上坐着一位老人,4．抢包者从老人身旁跑过，老人用伞将他绊倒,5．两名警察逮捕抢劫者,6．妇女感谢老人，人们称赞老人的机智OneSundaymorning,thereweresomepeopleinZhongshanPark.Atastand,awomanwasbuyinganice-creamwhenayoungmanbehindhersnatchedherhandbagaway.Sheshouted:“Stopthief!He’ssnatchedmybag!”Hearingthis,afewpeoplebegantorunafterhim.Therewasanoldmansittingquietlyonabenchnearby.Asthesnatcherwasrunningpasthim,theoldmanquicklypickeduphisumbrellaandputitbetweenthesnatcher’slegs.Theyoungmanfelldownonthegroundhard.Soontwopolicemencameinapolicecarandarrestedhim.Thewomanthankedtheoldman,andthepeoplearoundpraisedtheoldmanforhiscleverness(107)HowtowriteapictureHowtowriteapicturestorystoryStep1:Watchthepicturesfromthefirstonetothelastoneandgetthemainideaofthewholestory.通看全图，掌握大意根据每幅图提示找要点，根据要点,找词组。Step2:Choosethecorrectmainpointorphraseforeachpicture.clockdidn'tringwokeuplateCookingburnedmyhandranoutmissedthebusranthreemilestotheschoolarrivedtherefoundthatitwasSundayStep3:Puteachgroupofwordsintoasentence.(Payattentiontothecorrectverbform.)根据词组组句子Inthemorning,myalarmclockdidn'tring.Iwokeuplate.IburnedmyhandwhenIwascookingbreakfast.Iranoutofthehousetocatchthebus.Imissedit.Ihadtorunthreemilestotheschool.(Ihadtogotoschoolonfoot.)WhenIarrivedthere,IfoundthatitwasSunday.Step4:Choosecorrectconnectivestojointhesentencesintoapassage使用恰当连词，连句成文。Inthemorning,myalarmclockdidn'tringsoIwokeupanhourlate.IwasinsuchahurrythatIburntmyhandwhenIwascookingbreakfast.ThenIranoutofthehousetocatchthe8:30bus,butofcourseImissedit.May18thcloudyIwasveryunhappybecauseIknewmyteachergotangryifanyonewaslateforclass.SoIranthreemilestotheschool.ButwhenIarrivedthereintheend,IfoundthatitwasSunday.昨天下午你到越秀公园游玩，昨天下午你到越秀公园游玩，刚好看到—个救人的过程。刚好看到—个救人的过程。请根据下面所拍下的几幅照请根据下面所拍下的几幅照片，用英语写—篇报导，寄片，用英语写—篇报导，寄给“英文早报”。给“英文早报”。要求：①字数约100，不包括已给出的开头部分。②最后一幅照片因底片曝光，请自行补充合理的情节，使报导完整。YesterdayafternoonIwenttoYuexiuPark.IthappenedthatIsawatouchingevent.YesterdayafternoonIwenttoYuexiuPark.IthappenedthatIsawatouchingevent.Atthattime,somepeoplewereboatingonthelake.Amongthemwasahappyfamily.Theyweretakingphotoswhensuddenlythegirlfellofftheboatintothewater.Shewasstrugglingandherparentscriedout,“Help!Help!”Itwasobviouslythattheycouldn’tswimatall.Fromnearbyayoungmanimmediatelyrushedtothelake.Withouttakingoffhisclothes,hejumpedintothewaterandquicklyswamtowardsthegirl,whowasalreadytiredout.Atlasthecarriedhertothebank.Shewassaved!Howhappytheparentswere!Beforetheythoughtofthankingtheyoungman,hehaddisappeared.
