写实派1Asisillustrated/depicted/conveyed/revealed/betrayed/showninthepicture,(图的内容原则上用一个主从句表达,功底.两句合一句的途经,1AND连结2WHICH或WHEREAS连结3非谓语)thetwopetneighborsgreeteachotherpolitelyandamicably,whereas(=WHILE/ONTHEOTHERHAND)thetwopets’ownersseemtoignoreeachother.Simpleasitis,thedrawingrendersusponderingawefully.(凑字数,其富余时,可省去)Accordingly,whatthisfar-reaching/thought-provokingpicturedepictsreflectsacommonphenomenonintoday’ssociety:(反映的现实)pets,ratherthan/insteadofpeoplearoundthem,aresuchanindispensablepartintheirdailylifetothepointwhere(加以讲解)theyareexcessively/inordinately(负面词汇,作者的态度尽在不言中,回避使用IBELIVE,ITHINK之类的句式)fondoftheirbelovedanimalswhileneglectingthosewhocarethem,whichhasarousedgreatconcernandshouldbegivenenoughconsideration.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitssymbolicmeaningthat(主题句,尽量避免使用1主系表2THEREBE结构主张使用下列句型,1NOTHING+BE+ADJ+THAN+TO+DO2ONNOACCOUNTCANWE3ITISTIME+S+V-ED4IT无主句)indifferenceshouldbeclearedupamongpeople,withtheharmonioussocietyechoedvigorouslynowadaysinChinaoughttobeweighed/taken/ponderedseriously./earnestly/conscientiouslyWhydowelayemphasisonthis(指代词表过渡)severalpoints(名词复数,总分总的标志)analyzedbelowmightequipuswiththedeeperunderstandingofwhatweareheadingfor.Foronething,(分述标志词)sincewehavetoliveonanon-the-movelifestyle,wearedeniedchancestoshareourfeelingswithourfriendsandrelatives.Foranother(分述标志词),withsomanydishonestiesgoingaroundinourlifeandthenindifferenceoccurring,wemighthavenochoicebuttoenjoythecompanyofpets.Andaboveall(分述标志词),toomanytragedies-seeingsomeoneinmortaldangerwithoutliftingafingertosavehim-putonthestageinourdailylifealmosteveryday,Nobetterillustrationofthisideatouchedonabovecanbemaintained/taken/weighedthanthecaseaslistedbelow,(例证)acrowdofpeopleremainedappallinglynonchalance(=indifference,论据是论点的具体体现,主题核心词汇重复)tothepleaofamother,sinceshefailedtooffertherequiredamountofcashasapricetosaveherdrowningson,thewomanatlastwatchedhersonsinktodeath..Consequently/Accordingly/Onbalance/Therefore/Itfollowsthat,noissueinchinaisasbasictobuildupthesocietyinharmonyasironingoutindifferenceamongpeople.(此句为小节,1与TS首尾呼应,重复原则growoutof=clearup2为第三段起势)Judgingfromwhathasbeenarguedabove,peoplehavecometorealizetheharmsofindifferencehasbeen,likePandora’sbox,thecripplingforceofestablishingtheharmonysociety.Itis,therefore,necessarythatsomeeffectivestepsbemadeto(点主题重复原则)narrowandbridgethegapamongpeople.Tobeginwith,(以法治国)thegovernmentshouldmakelawtoestablishthesocietyinwhichpeopleliveinharmony.Inaddition,(以德治国)peopleshouldenhancetheawarenessofconcernandcareeachotherespecially.Onlybyundergoingthesemeasures,canwemakeoursociety,wherepeople,evennotknowingeachother,helpamongthem,appealtoeveryone.2Asisillustrated/depicted/conveyed/revealed/betrayed/showninthepicture,(图的内容原则上用一个主从句表达,功底.两句合一句的途经,1AND连结2WHICH或WHEREAS连结3非谓语)aladyandagentlemanarewatchinganartificialsceneonthetopofabuildingwithnumeroustowerblockssurroundingthem.(=WHILE/ONTHEOTHERHAND)Simpleasitis,thedrawingsetsusthinkingtoomuch.(凑字数,其富余时,可省去)Accordingly,whatthisfar-reaching/thought-provokingpicturedepictsisacommonphenomenonintoday’ssociety,(反映的现实)toomanyman-madeprojectssuchasskyscrapershaveexcessivelybeenbuilt...
