主题写作学案【思路点拨】第一步：审题：人称______________时态_______________第二步：列提纲&加首尾段。第1段：引出假期计划。讲述同学们的假期计划。参考句型：Summervacationiscoming….Studentsmadetheirvacationplans.Some….some….others…..第2段：我的假期计划和原因或目的。参考句型：Ihavedifferentplansfromthem./Ihaveaplanaswell./Asforme,….Iamgoingto…./Iwill….Iplan/want/hopeto….Inordertokeephealthy/openmymind/broadyourhorizon(开拓视野)/getbettergrades/relaxmyself(放松自己)…..第3段：表达希望或心情，呼应主题HowexcitedIamnow.(现在是多么得激动啊！).Ireallycan’twait.(我真的迫不及待了。)Ihopemysummervacationis….Iwanttohavea/an…..vacation.第三步：连接词：并列列举some….some….others…..有序列举first/firstlysecond/secondlythird/thirdlytobeginwiththen/what’smore/besidesfinally.第四步：美化文章：Asasayinggoesthat…..Weallknowthat………..Healthisbetterthanwealth.Timeandtidewaitfornoman.Readingmakesafullman.AllworkandnoplaymakeJackadullboy.Itisbettertotraveltenthousandmilesthantoreadtenthousandbooks.暑假将至，同学们就自己的暑假安排进行了交流。请你用英语介绍一下同学们和自己的暑期计划。内容包括:1.一些同学打算外出旅行，放松一下；一些同学计划在家中读书，为将来的学习做准备；另一些同学准备参加体育炼，保持身体健康；2.谈谈自己的暑期安排和原因。注意：1．词数：60-80词；2．文中不能出现真实的学校、班级和姓名。姓名____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【作文评价】1.自我欣赏与修正：朗读自己的文章，并从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正2.同伴互赏注意使用修改字符：优美句子～；漏词∧；错处：○；去掉／；语法错误G,人称错误P，时态错误T。3.集体赏析评价标准项目标准自我评价同伴评价教师评价结构（3分）段落合理（2分）衔接自然(1分)内容（8分）要点全面介绍同学的假期计划（4分）我的假期计划和原因（4分）拓展合理(2分)语言（3分）词汇丰富(1分)句法正确，语言优美(2分)卷面（1分）书写工整（1分）Homework:Theseconddraft（写二稿）__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
