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（一）TheSpringFestivaliscoming.ItisverysignificantforChinese,whenallthefamilymembersgettogether.ItislikeChristmasinthewesterncountries.DoyouwanttofeeltheChineseculture?Iamsureyouwilllivehappilyhereandlearnalotoffunnythings.Besides,Icanalsoshowyouaroundsomeplaceshere.（二）TheSpringFestivalisjustaroundthecorner.ItisofgreatsignificanceforChinese,whenallthefamilymembersgettogether.ItislikeChristmasinthewesterncountries.WouldyouliketofeeltheChineseculture?Iamsureyouwilllivehappilyhereandlearnalotoffunnythings.What’smore,Icanalsoshowyouaroundsomeplacesofinteresthere.Whichpassageismorebeautiful?2010江苏书面表达亮点Beautifysentenceswithbeautifulwords,phrases，linkingwords,sentencestructuresinyourwriting.--提升第一反应词、句用use参观拜访visit喜欢like帮忙help非常花…(时间，金钱）…very+adj.spend..indoing(onsth.)第一反应词代替词enjoy,befondof,beinto,beinterestedinbelongingtodopayavisittomakeuseofput…tousedosb.afavorgive/lendsbahandmorethan+adj.devote…todoingsth./sth.Ittakessb…todosth.be+adj.顺序first,second,递进besides结果so并列（和)and一…就…assoonas总结…firstofall,firstly,secondly,finally,lastly,lastbutnotleastwhat’smoremoreoverfurthermoreinaddition…第一反应词代替词be+of+n.(beveryuseful=beofgreatuse)thus,therefore,sothatasaresult/consequence,aswell，aswellas，notonly…butalso…inconclusion,allinall,inshort,ingeneral,generallyspeaking,inbriefinawordon/upondoing…on/upon+n.themoment/minuteimmediately1.Thefollowingday,wevisitedherwithflowersandfruit.2.Ourschoolhasanewlook.3.Thepictureletmethinkofthosewhosucceedinunfavorableconditions.4.Thankyouforhelpingmetosolvetheproblems.5.PleaseletmeknowifyouhaveanyquestionsandI’dbeveryhappytohelp.Beautifythesesentencesbywonderfulexpressions.6.Assoonaswearrivedthere,webegantoworkatonce.7.wecanachieveourgoalsonlyinthisway.（用Only+介词词组位于句首倒装句式）8.TheEnglishclubimprovedtheirspokenEnglishandbroughtthemmuchfun.(notonly..butalso)9.Loveandconcernhavebroughtaboutthegreatchanges.（强调句）10..Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.(用whose定语从句)Beautifythesesentences.beautifysentences1)Thefollowingday,wevisitedherwithflowersandfruit.=Thefollowingday,wepaidavisittoherwithflowersandfruit.(2011北京)4.Thankyouforhelpingmetosolvetheproblems.=Iwillappreciateitifyoucangivemeahandtosolvetheproblems.（2011山东）3.Thepictureletmethinkofthosewhosucceedinunfavorableconditions.2.Ourschoolhasanewlook.=Ourschoolistakingonanewlook.(2011福建)=Thepictureremindmeofthosewhosucceedinunfavorableconditions.(2010天津)5.PleaseletmeknowifyouhaveanyquestionsandI’dbeveryhappytohelp.=PleaseletmeifyouhaveanyquestionsandI’dbemorethanhappytohelp.(2010全国二)6.Assoonaswearrivedthere,webegantoworkatonce.=Onarrivingthere,webegantoworkatonce.(2009北京)7.wecanachieveourgoalsonlyinthisway.（用Only+介词词组位于句首倒装句式）(用ondoing一…就..引导从句)Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoals=Itisloveandconcernthathavebroughtaboutthegreatchanges.(2011福建)9.Loveandconcernhavebroughtaboutthegreatchanges.（强调句）8.TheEnglishclubimprovedtheirspokenEnglishandbroughtthemmuchfun.(notonly..butalso)10..Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.(用whose定语从句)=TheEnglishclubnotonlyimprovedtheirspokenEnglishbutalsobroughtthemmuchfun.(2010天津)=Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenisspokenhighlyof.Iamwritingtoaskifyouareabletohelpme.Iwanttohaveapenfriend...