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TEACHER-STUDENTRELATIONSHIPTASKS•Readapassage.•Write1)thesummaryofthepassagewithabout30words;2)some(usu.3)paragraphstoanswerthegivenquestions,withabout120words.THELAYOUTSummarySummaryMainbodyMainbodyanswertoquestionanswertoquestion11answertoquestion2answertoquestion2answertoquestion3answertoquestion3Noemptyline.写概括的基本步骤阅读原文理解大意找关键词组织语言注意：1.30-40词为佳；2.概括全文还是部分？3.不要强求只用一句话、零语法错误；4.最简、最细；5.全文起草。成文根据主旨，理清keywords间的关系，如因果、转折等。审题1.以约30个词概括学生不愿告诉老师内心想法的原因；2.然后以约120个词就“现代师生关系”这个主题发表你的看法，并包括如下要点：（1）你是否愿意告诉老师你内心的想法？为什么？（2）你希望你与你的老师之间的关系是怎样的？（3）如何才能建立这种关系？1.以约30个词概括学生不愿告诉老师内心想法的原因；Thegenerationgapbetweenstudentsandtheirteachersisbecomingmoresignificantwithonly3.3percentoutofasurveygroupof1,000studentsfrom30keymiddleschoolsinthecitysayingtheywouldbewillingtotelltheirteachersoftheirinnerthoughts.Intoday'seducationalenvironment,teachersarepositionedtobetheauthorityfigureforlearninginsteadofalsobecomingagoodfriendinthelivesofstudents.Asonlystudentswithgoodmarksinexamsareconsideredthe"applesintheeyes"oftheteachers,moststudentsthinktheirteacherstobepartial."Ifeelsadtohearsuchremarks,"saidYuYi,awell-knownspecial-classteacher.Sherecalledthatinthepast,teachersandstudentswouldplaybasketballtogetherorcommentonnovelswhilesittingonthegrassduringabreak.Buttoday,studyandgoodmarksaretheonlytopicsofconversationbetweenstudentsandteachers."Schoolsarenotonlytheplacewhereknowledgeisimpartedbutalsowherestudentsaretaughthowtobeanuprightperson,"Yusaid."Thesuccessofapersonisnotmerelydeterminedbyintelligencebutalsobyemotionalstate."YangXiong,directoroftheJuvenileResearchInstitute,saidtheeducationalsystemwhichfocusesonexaminationsshouldbeheldtobegreatlyresponsible.only3.3percentwillingtotelltheirteachersoftheirinnerthoughts.arepositionedtobetheauthorityfigurepartialsystemfocusesonexamsfeelrecalledSchools*Studentsarebecomingunwillingtoconfesstotheirteachersbecausetheyarenotequalinpositionandteacherslaytoomuchemphasisontheacademicperformancesofthestudents.*Studentsareunwillingtosharetheirinnerthoughtswiththeirteachersbecauseteachersareseenasauthorityfigures.Someofthemarepartialandonlyfocusonmarks/theirconversationtopicsarelimitedtomarks.Theeducationalsystemisalsoresponsible.•Studentsareunwillingtotelltheirinnerthoughtsnotonlyduetotheteachers’positionastheauthorityfigure,butalsobecausetheyarethoughttobepartialtostudentswithgoodmarksintoday’stest-focusededucationalsystem.•Studentsarenotwillingtotelltheirteachersoftheirinnerthoughts,becausetheythinkteacherstobeauthorityfiguresforlearninginsteadoffriendsandbepartialforstudentswithgoodmarks.(byZhouLuyao)写主体部分的基本步骤确定主题写主题句观点展开（英文列提纲）注意：1.一个问题写一段；2.用词组/句型列提纲和起草；3.篇末使用结尾句.连接、成文每个观点/主题下要有2-3个支撑句；头脑风暴。审题2.然后以约120个词就“现代师生关系”这个主题发表你的看法，并包括如下要点：（1）你是否愿意告诉老师你内心的想法？为什么？（2）你希望你与你的老师之间的关系是怎样的？（3）如何才能建立这种关系？Opinion-reasonDescriptionSuggestionsTOPICSENTENCES(1)你是否愿意告诉老师你内心的想法？为什么？•Yes.•Whilesomestudentsmighthavedoubts,Iamwillingtoshareinnerthoughtswithmyteac...