高考书面表达高级表达方式（一）一般句高级句1.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.①②You’llhavenotroublefindingmyhouse.2.Ihopeyoucanwritemebacksoon.①②Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.3.①Womenaremoreimportantthanbeforeinsociety.②womenareplayingamoreimportantpartinsociety.4.Myhometownisinthesouthof①China.②MyhometownislocatedinthesouthofChina.•比如：“北京很吸迷人。”你也许不知道“迷人”或“吸引人（attractpeople）”用英文怎么说。但是，你可以绕开生词，换一种方式把这句话写出来，比如这么写:•你看，“so…that…”结构是初中学过的，这句话每个单词都很简单啊。像这个档次的句子，就足以使你脱颖而出了！Beijingissobeautifulthatmanypeoplecomehereeveryyear.SobeautifulisBeijingthatmanypeoplecomehereeveryyear.启发你的“创造力”要能够把短句拼成长句•到此时，尽量不要使用“many”这个字,因为它代表的数字不具体,使你的文章给读者一种“空”的感觉。•不妨换“many”为“thousandsof”，于是改进为：Beijingissobeautifulthatthousandsofpeoplecomehereeveryyearfromallaroundtheworld.•或者再“拉长”为：Beijingissobeautifulthatthousandsofpeoplecomehereeveryyearfromallaroundtheworld,nomatteryoungorold,menorwomen.简单变换能够美化句子的结构,写出高考满分句式•当你写出“IfIhavetime,Iwilltakeyoutomyschool.”你可以把这句话写成•Iwill,ifIhavetime,takeyoutomyschool.•这样的句式，早已体现在官方满分样本范文之中，痛心的是，绝大多数考生对此完全不知晓。•Mybrotherisacollegestudent,andmybrotherisgladtohelpothers.•你要意识到这两个英文句子还可以被拼成一个结构优美的句子：•接下来，我再教你一个简化规则，让你最终把这句话写得相当洗练：••Mybrother,whoisacollegestudent,isgladtohelpothers.Mybrother,acollegestudent,isgladtohelpothers.1.Ourgovernmentwantstobuilda“harmonioussociety”.=>2.AdictionaryisveryusefultoEnglishlearners.=>PracticeOurgovernmentisaimingtobuilda“harmonioussociety”.AdictionaryisofgreatusetoEnglishlearners.3.Hearrivedhereat5pmyesterday.=>4.Inourschool,therearetwenty-sixclassrooms.=>PracticeHedidn’tarrivehereuntil5pmyesterday.Ourschoolismadeupoftwenty-sixclassrooms.5.Alargenumberofvisitorscomehereeveryday.=>6.Ihopemysummerholidaywillcomesoon.=>PracticeAlargenumberofpeoplepayavisithereeveryday.I’mlookingforwardtothecomingofmysummerholiday.记叙文一、审题认真读题然后找出基本要素:5W1H何时何地何人为何如何做了何事二、抓要点确定主要行为，配动词，注意时态、语态及搭配的副词、介词等Whathappened?三、扩展成句形成基本语义单位，把要点变成完整的句子，注意连词Whodidwhat?四、连句成文时间空间细节连贯呼应词与词搭配句与句相连五、查错改错要尽量剔除错误主谓一致吗？时态正确吗？语态正确吗？有“半截话”吗？六、誊写卷面整洁不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分！逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇时间顺序first,second,then,finally/atlast,soonimmediately,suddenly空间顺序here,there,ononeside…ontheotherside,infrontof,atthebackof,nextto对称顺序foronething,fortheotherthing,ononehand,ontheotherhand转折顺序but,however,while,though,otherwise因果顺序because,since,as,thanksto,asaresult(of)条件顺序aslongas,solongas,onconditionthat,if,unless让步顺序though,as,evenif/though,whether,who(what,when,where)ever递进顺序what’smore,besides,tomakemattersworse,what’sworse过渡性插入语Ithink,I’mafraid,youknow,Asweallknow1.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）2.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）Whatsurpriseshimist...
