永北镇中学杨柱莲12Ifyouwanttowritewell,youmustlearn:•STEP1:learntoexpandsentences.(扩句)•STEP2:Learntousethesuitablelinkingwords.（学会使用合适的连接词）•STEP3:useyourimagination（展开想象力）PartIWritingskillsSTEP1:learntoexpandsentences.(扩句)Eg：1.WemetLiMing.WemetLiMingonthewaytoschoolyesterday.2.Thestudentsarediscussingtheplan.Thestudentsarewarmlydiscussingtheplanofthespringfieldtrip.3.Istayeduplastnight.IstayeduplatelastnightbecauseIsawasoccergame.4.StudyingEnglishisnoteasy.MoststudentsthinkthatstudyingEnglishisnoteasy.5.Janeisashygirl.Janeisaquietandshygirl.Andsheisafraidofspeakinginpublic.4•STEP2:Learntousethesuitablelinkingwords.（学会使用合适的连接词）•连词：and,but,or,so,when,before,after,because,if,assoonas,though•1).Shedidn’tcometoschoolyesterday.Shegotabadlycold.•Shedidn’tcometoschoolyesterdaybecauseshegotabadcold.•2).Thelittlegirlcriedloudly.Shesawhermother.•Thelittlegirlcriedloudlyassoonasshesawhermother.•3).Heateanotherpieceofcake.Hedranksomewater.•Heateanotherpieceofcakeafterdrinkingsomewater.•4).Heisverytired,hedidn’tstopworking.Thoughheisverytired,hedidn’tstopworking.•5).Yesterdayhedidnothing.Hesleptathome.•Hedidnothingbutsleptathomeyesterday.56•STEP3:useyourimagination（展开想象力）•1)choosethecorrecttense:thefuturetense,thepresenttenseorthesimplepasttense（一般将来时,一般现在时或一般过去时）•Ifyouchoosethecorrecttenseyouwillmakefewermistakes.•Inthefuturetense,we’llusewillorbegoingtodo•Inthesimplepasttense,we’llchangetheverbsintopasttense.•2）Accordingtothegiveninformation,lookingfortherelatedmaterials.•Eg:Thegiveninformationis（已知信息）:MyFriend•Theunknowninformationis(未知信息):hisage,hisheight,hislooking,hishobby,hisworkandsoon•Passage：Ihaveafriend,heisaman,heisabout38yearsold,andheismediumheight,hehasasquareface,bigeyes,andhehasshortblackhair.Heisanengineer,heworksinabigcarfactory.Helikesdoingsports,suchasclimbing,playingballs,travelling,bodybuilding,etc.Smallskill:5W1H•5W:What,Where,,When,Why,Who.•1H:How.•Ifyouwanttowriteacompositionwell,youhadbetterknowacomposition´s5W1H.7AvisittoBeiJing8Thinkabout“5W1H’’•Whatdowedo/take?•Whendowedoit?•Wheredowego?•Whydowedoit?•Whodowegowith?•Howdowegothere?9ApairofsunglassesSomeclothesAcameraAmapWhatdowetake?11ThenWheredowego?12长城TheGreatWall颐和园TheSummerPalace人民英雄纪念碑TheMonumentofPeople’sHeroes13香山FragranceHill北京大学BeiJingUniversity天安门广场Tian’anmenSquareEg.AVisittoBeiJingLastweek,wevisitedBeiJing,Itwasapleasanttrip.Beforewestartedout,IwassoexcitedthatIcouldn’tsleepatall.Iputsomethingsintomybackpack:amap,someclothes,aphoto,apairofsunglassesandsoon.Weplanedtogettherebyplane.1415Duringthefive-daytripinBeijing,wevisitedalotofinterests.ThemostattractiveplaceformeistheGreatWall.WetriedourbesttoclimbontheGreatWall.ThesecondunforgettableplaceisTian’anmenSquare.It’sthesymbolofChina.TheMonumentofPeople’sHeroesisinthecenterofit.It’sameaningfulplace.Itwillstayinmymindforalongtime.BeiJingUniversityisawonderfulplace.It’sbigandwonderful.WealsoclimbedFragranceHill,andtookmanyphotos.Afterthat,weexploredtheSummerPalace,weatetheBeiJingroastduckthere.Ienjoyedthemverymuch.16BeijingisthecapitalofChina,asaChinese,Iamreallyproudofmygreatmotherland.I’llneverforgetthisexcitingtrip.IhopeIwillvisitBeijingforasecondtime.TheEND•THANKYOU!17
