书面表达之赢取高分技巧与策略Teachingaims:1.Enablethestudentstoknowtheskillsandstrategiestheycanusewhenwritingacompostion,2.Enablethestudentstousewhattheylearntofinishthetasks3.EnablethestudentstohaveaclearideaonhowtogetmorepointsinwritingTeachingdifficultpoint:Howtoletthestudentsfurtherlyunderstandtheskillsandstrategiesthroughtheexercises.Teachingprocedures:Step1:GreetingsandLead-inGreetthewholeclass.Tellthestudentsthattoday’stopicisaboutEnglishwriting.Englishwritingisofgreatvaluebecauseittakesup25points.WritingagoodcompositionisverynecessaryforthemiftheywanttogetahighmarkintheNationalCollegeEntranceExamination.Step2:Tipone1.Atfirst,showthemashortpassagewhichiscopyedfromoneofthestudents’composition.Askthemtofindoutthemistakesandthencorrectthem.Passage:35%ofusthinkthatdosomesportsisagoodwaytoreleasethestress,suchasplayfootball.But45%ofusthinkmusicisthebestway,itisgoodforus.Atlast,20%thinktheywouldliketurntoteachersforhelpiftheyareconvenient.Answers:doingplayingwhichtoitis2.Analyzethecommonmistakesthestudentsoftenmakeinwritingbydoingmoreexercises.1)句子谓语Thebuildinglikeamatchbox.Helpthemwhentheyareneedhelp.2)主谓不一致SomestudentslikethebooksthatwaswrittenbyLuXun.Itisthebusinessman’sdeedthatreallymakepeopleangry.3)时态错误Agirlisrescuedbythesoldiersfromtheearthquake.4.短语误用Tomydisappoint,LiuXiangdroppedout.ButallChinesecouldunderstandhimandwouldstillsupporthim.5.冠词误用AtLanternFestival,averyfunnythinghappenedinLian-yuan.Amanaskedformarriageinthestreet.6.中式英语Therearemanypeoplecomplainthatfoodpricesaresohigh.Tostudents,ownacellphoneisfashionable.AnearthquakehappenedinSichuanonMay3.DrawaconclusiontogetTipOne文章的语法要求使用正确、准确。文章中存在语法错误必然会影响最终的得分。所以，大家在平时写作时要养成时时提醒自己尽量不犯语法错误的习惯，特别是要尽量避免由于粗心引起的错误.Step3:TipTwo1.Showthestudentsanotherpassagetolettheyknowthatonlyavoidingthemistakesisnotenough.Theyneedsomethingelse.Passage:Inordertoreleasethestress,35%ofuslikeplayingfootball.45%likelisteningtomusic,whiletherestliketurningtoteachers.love/enjoy/beinterestedin/preferto/wouldlike2.ThendrawaconclusiontogetTipTwo词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少,也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。从评分标准可知,运用高级的词汇对提高书面表达的分数至关重要。3.Askthestudentstousethedifferentwordsoradvancedwordstoexpressthesamemeaning.明显的clear/obvious/evident/apparent有才能的gifted/talented导致cause/leadto/resultin/bringabout/contributeto意志坚强的strong-willed/strong-determined1.Inourschool,thereareseventy-threeclasses.Ourschool___________seventy-threeclasses.2.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.Theplan____________afailure.3.Thestudentsneedn’tpayfortheirbooks.Books___________thestudents.4.SuddenlyIhadagoodidea.Agoodideasuddenly___________me.Answers:ismadeupof/consistsofturnedoutto/provedtobe/endupwitharefreeforoccurredto/struck2Step4:TipThree1.Showthestudentsthelastpassagetoletthemknowbesideswords,thereissomethingelsetheyneeddoinordertomakethewholepassagebeautifulandattractive.Passage:35%ofusthinkthatsportsisagoodwaytoreleasethestress.But45%believethatmusicisagoodway,whichisgoodforus.Atlast,20%supposewe’dliketoturntoourteachersifconvenient.Sb.have/holdthepoint/viewthat…Whatsb.usetoreleasethestressisthat2.DrawaconclusiontogetTipThree在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句型，要灵活运用各种语法结构。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不...
