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WritingbasedonacartoonProblems:1.wrongstructures2.improperdescription3.misunderstandingwhatthepictureshowsStepILeadinTasks:1.Todealwithproblemsinwritingbasedonacartoon2.TolearnthebasicstructureofcartoonwritingStepIIAnexampleHowcanwewriteacompositionbasedonacartoon?Writing:目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立“有效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以HealthCare”为题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。A.Makeanoutlineofthewriting1.漫画内容Writing:目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立“有效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以HealthCare”为题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。2.现象→后果3.你的观点1.Description:1.Anoldmanwasinhospitalforhisheartattack.2.Threeweekslater,hepaidhismedicalfeebeforehelefthospital.3.Thebillwith$5,0000shockedhim.4.Henearlyfellontothefloor.5.Thehighfeewasanotherheartattacktohim.2.Phenomenon:Themedicalfeesareveryhigh.3.Youropinion(Measures)Consequencespeople:society:government:hospital:2.Phenomenon:Themedicalfeesareveryhigh.Consequencespeople:society:Peoplecan’taffordtheheavymedicalfeesandhavetobearthepainofillness.Itwon’tbebeneficialtothebuildingofourharmonioussociety.3.Youropinion(Measures)government:hospital:Governmentshouldsetupeffectivemedicalsystem.Theyshouldputthebenefitsofthepatientsinthefirstplaceandreducethefee.Wecanseeanoldmanwasinhospitalforhisheartattack.Threeweekslater,hewasaskedtopayhismedicalfeebeforehelefthospital.Whenhesawthebill,hegotshockedandnearlyfellontothefloor.Thehighfeewasanotherheartattacktohim.Nowadays,themedicalfeesarehigh.Manypeopleareindebttogetmedicalfees.Somepeoplecan’taffordtheheavymedicalfees.Theyhavetobearthepainofillnesses.Itwon’tbebeneficialtoourharmonioussociety.Ithinkthemedicalexpensesshouldbereduced.Thegovernmentshouldbuildupaneffectivemedicalsystem.Thehospitalshouldputthebenefitsofthepatientsinthefirstplace.B.FormadraftbyjoiningthesentencesWecanseeanoldmanwasinhospitalforhisheartattack.Threeweekslater,hewasaskedtopayhismedicalfeebeforehelefthospital.Whenhesawthebill,hegotshockedandnearlyfellontothefloor.Thehighfeewasanotherheartattacktohim.C.Polishupyourlanguage:__________________,wecanseeanoldmanwasinhospitalforhisheartattack.Threeweekslater,hewasaskedtopayhismedicalfeebeforehelefthospital.Whenhesawthebill,hewasshockedandcouldhardlystandonhisownfeet.Thehighfeewasanotherheartattacktohim.Myversion:AsisvividlyshowninthepictureThemomentleavingsoshockedthathecouldThehighfeewasbeyondwhathecouldafford,whichwasnodoubtanotherheartattacktohim.wasinformedofpayinghardlystandonhisownfeet.HealthCareAsisvividlyshowninthepicture,wecanseethattheoldmansufferingfromheartattackhadtogotohospitalformedicalcare.Threeweekslater,hewasinformedofpayinghismedicalfeebeforeleavinghospital.Themomenthesawthemedicalbillfromthehospital,soshockedwashethathecouldn’tstandonhisfeet.Thehighfeewasbeyondwhathecouldafford,soitwasnodoubtanotherheartattacktohim.D.Formthefinalwritingthreeparagraphs:1)describethepicture2)interpretitsmeaning:consequences/reasons3)giveyouropinionaboutthephenomenonSummarize:DesignPara1DescribethepictureThepictureistalkingabout/shows…Asisvividlyshown/portrayedinthepicture,Sentencepatterns:Para2InterpretthepictureThepictureshows/i...