山东滨州市2016高考英语二轮书面表达精选（7）SectionC(25marks)Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你的笔友Tony因上期高三期末数学考试未及格而倍受打击，情绪低落。请你(王华)写一封信给他，鼓励他重拾自信，实现梦想。注意：1、词数不少于120个；2、不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————【参考范文】DearTom,I’msorrytohearthatyoufailedinthelastfinalmathexam,butwhatworriesmemostisthatyouareinlowspiritswhenfacingfailure.Asseniorthreestudents,weallhavetakenexaminationsofdifferenttypesandexperiencedfailureaswellassuccess.Thereisnodoubtthatweshouldtakepositiveattitudestowardsoursetbacks.Weshouldsparenoeffortstoanalyzethecauseoffailure,whichcouldhelpusescaperepeatingthesimilarmistakes.Onlywhenwefindoutthecauseofourfailurecanwemakeprogressinourstudy.Asforyouranxiety,Ithinkdoingsomesportsisgoodforyoubecauseitcangiveyousometimetoberefreshedinbothbodyandmindsothatwecangoonwithourlearningenergeticallyandefficiently.Ihopeallabovecanhelpyoualot.Let’sworkhardtogetherandturnourdreamintoreality.Yours，WangHua【2014四川省资阳市第一次诊断性考试】书面表达（满分35分）假设你是李华，你的父母总是喜欢替你包办一切，你觉得很苦恼。请你根据以下提示给某英语报社编辑写一封信。1.简述现象（两种）；2.分析弊端（两个方面）；3.你的观点或建议。注意：1.词数120左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：独立性independenceDearEditor,I’dliketotellyousomeofmyproblemswithmyparentsindailylife.Myparentstendtomakealmostalldecisionsforme.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【评分原则】1.本题总分为35分，按5个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.词数少于100的，从总分中减去2分。4.评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6.如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。【语言错误的界定】1.考生必须以完整的主谓结构表达出要点，如有严重错误视为半个要点。2.考生如果以主从句表达要点...
