托福写作最容易犯的 22 种错误清单 1、结构不平行 例 子 : I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books、 将一系列的单词连接起来的时候,应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。 2、不知所云 例子:Many companies began using computers mouth、 3、段落过长,不分段,主语与动词一致问题 例 子 : She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time、 主语和动词不一致。 4、句子别扭 例子:We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed、 措辞过长或不清。换言之,句子显得滑稽可笑。 5、拼写错误主语、动词或宾语有问题 例子:I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it、 There was a terrible accident happen yesterday、 句子的基本结构有问题,缺少主语、动词或宾语,或者这些成分重复。 6、语气与文章不符 例子:I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me、 I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out、 语气与文章其他部分不相符,可能是过于正式或者太不正式。 7、代词指代不明 例子:If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication、 I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there、 代词所指代的指示词(介词所代替的名词)不清楚。 8、过于笼统 例子:We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse、 句子或者所表达的意思过于笼统,不能提供多少信息。 9、动词时态错误 例 子 : Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food、 动词时态不正确,检查一下是应该用现在时、过去时、将来时或者是完成时等等。 10、介词多余 例 子 : I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday 、 We went to downtown...