跟着名师学写作(含逐句点评解析)虽然我有太多的话题想说,但是每周能抽时间写成的只有两三篇。本期的话题是基于一直以来有人问我如何学习,却迟迟不肯付出行动。我想说的是,方法其实不重要,重要的是行动。知识的积累无非就是多读,多练,无它。所谓大道至简。昨天的时间稍微充足一点,所以,这篇我加上了批注。自己给自己写的文章加评注和分析也不是多见的吧,似乎有点高调了。不管怎么说,但愿对您有点用。Action and Meaning How do I make my study plan? What is the point of my decision if the result seems carved in stone?...评析:开头用疑问句用来设置悬念,也是点名主旨。这也是议论文的一种行文常规手段。What’s the point of doing…,用来询问做某事的意义何在。Be carved in stone,英文 解 释 : If a suggestion, plan, rule, etc. is carved in stone, it cannot be changed。一般否定句更常用,用来表明并非一成不变。 I was asked these questions recently by one of my students. He could recite many so-called golden rules in English learning but feared his effort would be in vain if he made an insensible decision or the action would get him nowhere because no pay-off was in sight temporarily. He told me that he felt overwhelmed and demotivated, unable to make even small decisions. 评析:具体说明上段疑问句产生的背景。这位同学患得患失,既想做出计划,又担心计划没有意义,从而始终不敢去行动,或者浅尝辄止。Golden rule, 英文解释:a very important principle, way of behaving etc that should be remembered。当然,这里也可以用 recipe,secret 等词。in vain 徒劳的;get sb nowhere 让某人一无所获;pay-off 回报,比 benefit 更容易理解;overwhelmed 必知所措的;demotivated 消极的,失去动力的。这两个词连用,用来突出茫然的状态,当然也可以选用 at a loss,我本来使用 have not the slightest idea of…,但是为了简洁,就弃用了。 For a few seconds it stumped me, mainly because I’ve never viewed English learning as a collection for aha moments. It’s a continuum, a lif...