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TipsforaBetterArticleDearHeadmaster,I'mverygladtowritealettertoyou.Thesedayswearetalkingabouthowtohaveabetterschoollife.Herearesomeofmysuggestions.Paragragh2:SuggestionsforschoolParagragh3:SuggestionsforteachersHopemysuggestionswillbehelpful.Thanksforreadingmyletter!Yourssincerely,LiuBoBodyBeginningEndingDearHeadmaster,I'mverygladtowritealettertoyou.Thesedayswearetalkingabouthowtohaveabetterschoollife.Herearesomeofmysuggestions.Paragragh2:SuggestionsforschoolParagragh3:SuggestionsforteachersHopemysuggestionswillbehelpful.Thanksforreadingmyletter!Yourssincerely,LiuBo.DearHeadmaster,I'mverygladtowritealettertoyou.Thesedayswearetalkingabouthowtohaveabetterschoollife.Herearesomeofmysuggestions.Firstofall,Ithinkourschoolshould....Second,....Third,.....Atlast......__________suggestionsforourteachers?.....___________teachers,Ithink.....Teachers_____haveagreatinfluenceonus.How/WhataboutAsforalsoUsingpropertransitionalsentences过渡句tomakeagreatpassage.First,openthelibrarymoreoften.Second,organizemoreafter-schoolactivities.Third,giveusmoretimeforsports.Atlast,organizefewertests.Howaboutsuggestionsforteachers?Ithinktheyshouldmakeclassesmoreinteresting.Also,theyshouldfinishclassesontime.Besides,theyshouldgiveuslesshomework.That'sall.BodyLinkingwords衔接词arehelpfulFirst,openthelibrarymoreoften.Second,organizemoreafter-schoolactivities.Third,giveusmoretimeforsports.Atlast,organizefewertests.Howaboutsuggestionsforteachers?Ithinktheyshouldmakeclassesmoreinteresting.Also,theyshouldfinishclassesontime.Besides,theyshouldgiveuslesshomework.That'sall.BodyMakeyoursuggestions/advicedifferentandpolitebyusingdifferentsentencepatterns句子模式Commonwaystogiveadvice:1、Youshould/mustdosth.2、Youaresupposedtodosth…应该3、What\Howaboutdoingsth.?5、Trytodosth…,please4、Whynotdosth?Whydon’tyoudosth.?7、You’dbetterdosth.6、It’sagoodidea\way\choicetodo…Doyouhaveanybetterways?Advancedwaystogiveadvice:8、Couldyoupleasedosth...?9、Wouldyouminddoingsth？12、There’snodoubtthatyoucandosth毫无疑问10、Itcouldn’tbebetterif…11、Nothingismoreinterestingthan…First,Ithinkyoushouldopenthelibrarymoreoften.Second,pleaseorganizemoreafter-schoolactivities.Third,whydon’tyougiveusmoretimeforsports.Atlast,itcouldn’tbebetterifyouorganizefewertests.Howaboutsuggestionsforteachers?Ithinktheyhadbettermakeclassesmoreinteresting.Also,finishingclassesontimeisnecessary.Besides,nothingismoreexcitingthangivinguslesshomework.That'sall.Body1.Cleartopic主题.2Transitionalsentences过渡句3.Linkingwords衔接词4.Differentsentencepatterns句子模式1.Theycanfinishclassesontime.Theygiveuslesshomework.Wewillbehappier.____theycanfinishclassesontime___giveuslesshomework,wewillbehappier.Ifand2.Wethinkourschoolshouldopenthelibrarymoreoften.Wecanhavemoretimetoreadbooksinit.Wethinkourschoolshouldopenthelibrarymoreoften_______wecanhavemoretimetoreadbooksinit.sothatRichsupportingdetails丰富的支撑句arehelpfulConjunctions连词•Ithinkourschoolshouldopenthelibrarymoreoften______readingbookscanopenoureyestotheoutsideworld.3.Ithinkourschoolshouldopenthelibrarymoreoften.Readingbookscanopenoureyestotheoutsideworld.because4.Playingsportsmakesusrelaxed.Ithelpsuskeephealthy.Playingsports__________makesusrelaxed__________helpsuskeephealthy.notonlybutalsoRichsupportingdetailsarehelpful5.Wehopethatteacherscanmakeclassesmoreinteresting.Wewillfeelbored.Wefall...