VS1.几乎照抄原文Itiscommonthatuniversitystudentstendtomakefunofothers.----裘韵改变句型+改变词组Theenjoymentofmakingfunofothersaresharedbyuniversitystudentsgenerally.----候怡雯概要写作常见错误分析Nooneknowswhyuniversitystudentsenjoypracticaljokes,especiallythehoax.照搬原文词组X照搬原文句型XVS2.过于具体不够概括Oneuniversitystudent,forexample,offeredthepoliceandworkmenwronginformationdeliberatelytomakethemmisunderstandeachother.----方健栩用恰当词组概括大意概要写作常见错误分析Auniversitystudentscheatedtwoworkmenthatastudentdressedupaspolicetocheatthemandthentoldthepolicethattwostudentsdressedupasworkmentotearuptheroad.描述具体内容X提及具体数字X照搬原文词组XVS3.字数不足表述单一概要写作常见错误分析Universitystudentslikecheatingothers.Onestudentcheatedbothpoliceandworkmen.Atlast,theyfoundtheywereallcheated.VS3.字数不足表述单一概要写作常见错误分析Universitystudentslikecheatingothers.Onestudentcheatedbothpoliceandworkmen.Atlast,theyfoundtheywereallcheated.安全字数：60-80概要写作美文赏析2一、要点齐全：1.害怕2.路径3.改变4.等待二、句式多变三、连词得当（词性得当）四、颜值高+字数可控VS1.要点遗漏Itiscommonthatuniversitystudentstendtomakefunofothers.----裘韵改变句型+改变词组Theenjoymentofmakingfunofothersaresharedbyuniversitystudentsgenerally.----候怡雯概要写作常见错误分析2Nooneknowswhyuniversitystudentsenjoypracticaljokes,especiallythehoax.照搬原文词组X照搬原文句型X1、缺少要点VS2.缺少连词Itiscommonthatuniversitystudentstendtomakefunofothers.----裘韵改变句型+改变词组Theenjoymentofmakingfunofothersaresharedbyuniversitystudentsgenerally.----候怡雯概要写作常见错误分析2Nooneknowswhyuniversitystudentsenjoypracticaljokes,especiallythehoax.照搬原文词组X照搬原文句型X2、缺少连词VS3.词性滥用Itiscommonthatuniversitystudentstendtomakefunofothers.----裘韵改变句型+改变词组Theenjoymentofmakingfunofothersaresharedbyuniversitystudentsgenerally.----候怡雯概要写作常见错误分析2Nooneknowswhyuniversitystudentsenjoypracticaljokes,especiallythehoax.照搬原文词组X照搬原文句型X3、词性滥用VS4.概括有失得当-过度或欠够Itiscommonthatuniversitystudentstendtomakefunofothers.----裘韵改变句型+改变词组Theenjoymentofmakingfunofothersaresharedbyuniversitystudentsgenerally.----候怡雯概要写作常见错误分析2Nooneknowswhyuniversitystudentsenjoypracticaljokes,especiallythehoax.照搬原文词组X照搬原文句型X4、概括有失得当5、句式很傻很天真
