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Whatisasummary?Asummaryisa__________passagewhichkeeps________________________oftheoriginal（原文）inyour_______wordsbutwithoutyouropinion.shortenedthekeyinformationownmainideaofthepassage+keypoints4-5sentences60-80wordsANighttheEarthANighttheEarthDidn’tSleepDidn’tSleep1.GetageneralunderstandingofthepassagePartⅠ(Para1)__________theearthquakePartⅡ(Para2-3)___________theearthquakePartⅢ(Para4)____________theearthquakebeforeduringafterIn1976,a_____________________earthquakestruckTangshan,causing___________.great/terrible/massive/horriblegreatlosses2.Getthekeypoints1)FindthetopicsentencesifanyPart1:Part2:Part3:Canwejustputalltopicsentencestogethertomakeasummary?StrangethingswerehappeninginthecountrysideofnortheastHebei.Itseemedasiftheworldwasatanend.Everywheretheylookednearlyeverythingwasdestroyed.Allhopewasnotlost.StrangethingswerehappeninginthecountrysideofnortheastHebei.Buttheonemillionpeopleofthecity,whothoughtlittleoftheseevents,wereasleepasusualthatnight.2)Rewrite（summarizedetails概括）Strangethingswerehappening.Therewere_______ofearthquake.water;wellwalls;animals;lights;sound;pipessignsButpeoplethoughtlittleofabouttheseevents.1.Thereweresomesignsofearthquakebutpeoplethoughtlittleofthem.signsItseemedasiftheworldwasatanend.a_______earthquakeIn15terriblesecondsalargecitylayinruins.2/3ofthemthousandsoffamilies400,000_________thewholecityat3:42directlybelowoneofthegreatestwasfelt…200kilometresaway;1/3ofthenationahugecrack;steamburst;riversofdirt______manypeopleterribledestroyedkilled++Aterribleearthquakedestroyedthewholecityandkilledmanypeople.Everywheretheylookednearlyeverythingwasdestroyed.Allhospitals/75%factories/buildings/90%homes…goneDamsfell/Bridges…notsafe;Railwaytracks…useless_______________were__________.BuildingsandfacilitiesCowsnevergivemilkPigsandchickensweredeadSandfilledwellsWater,foodandelectricitywerehardtoget.____________were____________.SuppliescutoffNearlyeverythingwasdestroyed,withbuildingsandfacilities________andsupplies___________.damagedcutoffdamagedAterribleearthquakedestroyedthewholecityandkilledmanypeople.Nearlyeverythingwasdestroyed,withbuildingsandfacilitiesdamagedandsuppliescutoff.2.Aterribleearthquakedestroyedthewholecity,withmanypeople_______,buildingsandfacilities_________andsupplies__________.+killeddamagedcutoffAllhopewasnotlost.Rescuecamedigoutthetrappedburythedeadbuildshelterstransportwater…3.Rescueindifferent________arrived,whichmadetheruinedcity________again.hopefulforms1.Thereweresignsofearthquakebutpeoplethoughtlittleofthem.2.Theterribleearthquakedestroyedalmostthewholecity,withmanypeoplekilled,buildingsandfacilitiesdamagedandsuppliescutoff.3.Rescueindifferentformsarrived,whichmadetheruinedcityhopefulagain.keypointsIn1976,aterribleearthquakestruckTangshan,causinggreatlosses.mainideaIn1976,aterribleearthquakestruckTangshan,causinggreatlosses.________________________,thereweresignsbutpeoplethoughtlittleofthem.__________,thewholecitywasdestroyed,withmanypeoplekilled,buildingsandfacilitiesdestroyedandsuppliescutoff.__________________________,rescueindifferentformsarrived,whichmadetheruinedcityhopefulagain.beforethequakeWhenithitsoonafterthedisaster3.Writeintoasummarylinkingdevices连接手段Luckily,Actually,In1976,aterribleearthquakestruckTangshan,causinggreatlosses.Actually,beforethequake,signshadappearedbutpeoplethere___________________them.Whenithit,withinseconds,thecitybecamesimplyhopeless,with__________________,buildingsandfacilitiesdestroyedandsuppliescutoff.Luckily,soonafterthedisaster,rescueindifferentformsarrived,whichmadetheruinedcityhopefulagain.synonym同义替换4.Polish润色paidnoattentiontonumerousliveslostAsummary1.Mainideaofthepassage2.Keypoints1)Findtopicsentencessupportmakeitmoreclearandaddnecessaryinformation3)Rewrite3.WriteandPolishlinkingdevices（衔接）2)Summarizedetails(概括）(synonyms)同义替换Tips1.Asummaryisashortpassageof60-80words.2.Ithas4-5sentences,withthefirstoneshowingthemainideaofthepassageandothersshowingthekeypoints.3.Writeitinyourownwordsandcopyingtheoriginal（原文）sentencesisnotallowed.4.Linkingwordsshouldbeaddedtomakeitcoherent（连贯）.5.Becarefultoavoidlanguagemistakes.6.Improvehandwritingtomakethepaperneat.1.Reviewwhatislearntaboutsummarywriting.2.Trytowriteasummary