专题十九短文改错高考试题Passage1(2013新课标全国Ⅰ)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.答案:Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtomeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhensheaway.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.Iremembermygrandfathervery.Hewastall,withbroadandabeardthatturnedfromblackgrayovertheyears.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsetapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawaytheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveknown.剖析:1.usedtodosth.表示“过去常常做某事”。2.此处描述过去的事情,因此应用一般过去时,与主句时态一致。3.remembersth./sb.verywell/clearly“很清楚地记得某事/某人”。4.人有两个肩膀,因此应用复数形式。5.turnfromAto/intoB表示“由A变成B”。6.他的嗓音低沉,这使他与众不同。短语setsb.apartfrom“使某人与众不同”。7.分析句子成分可知,逗号前后为两个并列的分句,且表示并列顺承关系,因此应用and连接。8.infact“事实上”,为固定搭配。9.during为介词,后可接名词或代词,不能引导从句,故应改为when。when在此处引导时间状语从句。10.我的爷爷是我曾见过的最温和的一个人。ever“曾经”,符合语境。Passage2(2013新课标全国Ⅱ)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。ThebookI’mreadingoftalksaboutafternoonteainBritain.Itissaidtohavestartedintheearly1800’s.Haveteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner,thatmightnotbeserveduntil8o’clockatnight.Thiscustomsoonbecomesanothermealofday.Interesting,ithadaconnectionbytheBritishporcelain(瓷器)industry.TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles.WhenteagotpopularinBritain,therewasacryingneedforgoodcupwithhandlestosuitBritishhabits.Thismadeforthegrowintheporcelainindustry.答案:ThebookI’mreadingoftalksaboutafternoonteainBritain.Itissaidtohavestartedintheearly1800’s.teainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner,mightnotbeserveduntil8o’clockatnight.Thiscustomsoonanothermealofday.,ithadaconnectiontheBritishporcelain(瓷器)industry.TeainChinawastraditionallyfromcupswithouthandles.WhenteagotpopularinBritain,therewasacryingneedforgoodwithhandlestosuitBritishhabits.Thismadefortheintheporcelainindustry.剖析:1.read为及物动词,其后不加介词。2.此处应用动名词短语作主语。3.which在此引导非限制性定语从句,并在从句中作主语。4.此处在介绍英国人喝下午茶这一习俗的形成,故应用一般过去时。5.day是可数名词,...
