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如何写叙事性记叙文【写作任务】请以“OneThingI’mProudof”为题，用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：1.记述事情经过；2.简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。注意：文章的标题已给出（不计词数）。OneThingI’mProudof【写作指导】一、审题定调本写作要求记叙一件自己认为得意的事情，属于叙事性记叙文，因此，写作时，我们可以时间为线索，以事件发生的先后顺序来记叙，同时通过议论来说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。写作时，素材的选取是重中之重。选材应从表现文章主题的需要出发，重点突出、详略得当。另外，通过审题可知，本篇习作应以第一人称为主，时态以一般过去时为主。二、谋篇布局本篇习作可分为三部分来写：第一部分：点出故事主题，导入正文（何事令“我”感到自豪）。第二部分：具体讲述故事发生的过程（交代清楚“六要素”）。第三部分：总结和感想（说明感到得意的原因或得到的启示）。三、组织语言1.第一部分：点出故事主题，导入正文。普通表达高级表达★Everyonehasthingstobeproudof,includingme.★Everyonehasthingswhichheisproudof,sodoI.★IstillrememberhowIsaved...★IwillneverforgethowproudIfeltwhenIsaved...2.第二部分：具体讲述故事发生的过程。普通表达高级表达★Itwasasunnyafternoon,andeverythingseemedOK.Suddenly,aterriblethinghappened.★Luckily,...wassavedby...★Fiveminuteslater,...★Shewasdeeplythankfulformytimelyandselflesshelp.★Onasunnyafternoon,everythingseemedtobeinharmonywhenaterriblethinghappenedsuddenly.★Thanksto...,...wassavedintime.★Afterwhatseemed5minutes,...★Shesaidgratefullythat...couldn’thavebeensavedwithoutmytimelyhelp.1.第三部分：总结和感想。普通表达高级表达★IamproudofwhatIdid.★Iwon’tregretdoingit.BynomeanswillIregretdoingitdespitethefactthatIwasindanger.【范文展示】普通范文OneThingI’mProudofIstillrememberhowIsavedaboythreedaysago.Itwasasunnyafternoon,andeverythingseemedOK.Suddenly,aterriblethinghappened.Adogwasrunningafteralittleboy.Ithoughtthattheboywasindanger.SoIthrewstonesatthedog.However,thedogwasn’tafraid.Itwantedtobitemeinstead.Luckily,Iwassavedbyapasser-by.Fiveminuteslater,theboy’smotherarrived.Shewasdeeplythankfulformytimelyandselflesshelp.Seeingtherelievedlookofthemother,IknewIwouldneverregretsavingherson.IamproudofwhatIdid.高级范文OneThingI’mProudofIwillneverforgethowproudIfeltwhenIsavedaboy.Onasunnyafternoonthreedaysago,everythingseemedtobeinharmonywhensuddenlyaterriblethinghappened.Aboywasbeingchasedbyafiercedog.Ithitmethattheboywasindanger.Ithrewstonesatthedog,butitfoughtback!Thankstoapasser-by,Iwassavedjustintime.Afterwhatseemed5minutes,theboy’smotherarrived.Shesaidgratefullythathersoncouldn’thavebeensavedwithoutmytimelyhelp.Iamproudofit.BynomeanswillIregretdoingitdespitethefactthatIwasindanger.温馨提示：同学们，仔细阅读两篇文章之后，你会发现二者采用了不同的表达方式来表达相同或相近的含义。因此，大家在平时的写作中，也应该多使用一些复杂结构或高级词汇，同时，也应学会使用简单词汇或句式来表达复杂的意思。说明：该写作任务选自2013年高考英语浙江卷，范文由作者提供。【实战演练】假设你是红星中学的学生李华，下面四幅图描述了近期发生在你们班的一个真实故事。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述你的老师上课不慎摔倒后所发生的事。注意：词数100左右（标题和开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。AnAccidentHappenedinOurClassroomLastMonday,wewerehavingChineseclasswhen______________________________________答案【实战演练】Onepossibleversion:AnAccidentHappenedinOurClassroomLastMonday,wewerehavingChineseclasswhenourteachersuddenlyslippedandfell.Withthehelpofsomeotherstudents,myclassmateLiuQiangwasabletocarryheronhisbacktotheschoolclinicimmediately.Itturnedoutthatherrightlegwasbrokenandshehadtostayinhospital.Thefollowingday,wewenttovisitherwithflowersandfruit.Seeingherlyinginbedwithherlegwrappedinbandages,wefeltsorryandhopedthatshewouldrecoversoon.ThisThursdayshereturnedtotheclassonawheelchairtogiveuslessons.Wewerealldeeplymovedandproudofhavingsucharesponsibleteacher.