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写作技巧点拨系列(八)揣摩图画内涵,从容掌控图画作文【典例导练】(2013·江苏高考)请根据你对右面两幅画的理解,以“ActionsSpeakLouderthanWords”为题,用英语写一篇作文。你的作文应包括以下内容:1.简要描述两幅图的内容;2.概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解;3.举例说明两幅图对你的启示。【写作指导】Ⅰ.常用句式(1)Whatisillustrated/reflectedinthepictureisthat...(2)Whatthepicturedescribesvividlyisakindofcommonphenomenonthat...(3)Thepicturevividlyreflectsaphenomenonwhereoursocietyisinbadneedof...(4)Seeingthepicture,Ican’thelpthinkinghowridiculous...is.However,whatisreflectedinthepictureisnotararephenomenoninmodernsociety.(5)Thereareatleasttwogoodreasonsaccountingfor...(6)Theremaybethreefactorswhichcontributeto/accountfor/areresponsibleforthisphenomenon.(7)Thesecondreasonisthat...(8)Facedwithphenomenon/theseproblems,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewith...(9)Itishightimewetooksomemeasurestoputanendtothisphenomenon/theseproblems.(10)Onlyinthiswaycanwe...(11)First,...Second,.....Third,...(12)Thesocialproblemhasarousedgreatconcernamongpeople.(13)Weshouldraisepeople’sawarenessof...Ⅱ.黄金模板第一段:描述图画Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,图画的内容.Thepicturetellsusthat图片大致反映的意思.第二段:解释、说明和分析图片Theimpliedmeaningofthepictureshouldbetakenintoaccountseriously.First/Tobeginwith,揭示涵义/原因/结果1,Second/What’smore,揭示涵义/原因/结果2.Lastbutnotleast/Finally,揭示涵义/原因/结果3(如果有的话).Andthesocialproblem(如果是现象的话可以用phenomenon)hasarousedthegreatconcern/careofourwholesociety/world/allthepeople.第三段:给出自己的看法和想法以及解决问题的办法Inmyview/pointofview(orAsforme),weshouldtakesomemeasuresasfollowstodealwiththeproblemsshowninthepicture.First,weshould具体的措施1.Andthenwehaveto/must具体的措施2.Onlyinthesewayscanwesolvetheproblemof具体的问题.【审题谋篇】信息全而不漏【佳句锤炼】词句精而高级1.图画中的信息是“百说不如一干”。(一般表达)Themessageinthepicturesis“Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.”(主语从句和同位语从句)____________________________________isthemessage___________________________________Whatthepicturesdescribevividly/conveythat“Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.”2.我们的地球正受到严重的破坏。我们该怎么做,是说空话还是采取切实可行的措施呢?(一般表达)Ourearthissufferingseveredamage.Whatshouldwedo,justhaveemptytalkortakepracticalmeasures?(不定式作状语+高级词汇+定语从句)Ourearthissufferingseveredamage.Shouldwejust_____________ortakepracticalmeasures_________theearth_____________________________?paylipservicetoprotectwhichissufferingseveredamage3.为了改善环境,我们应该立即采取措施,如停止砍伐树木。(一般表达)Toimprovetheenvironment,weshouldtakeimmediateaction.Weshouldstopcuttingdowntrees.(过去分词作状语)________________________________,weshouldtakeimmediatemeasures,suchasstoppingcuttingdowntrees,tobettertheenvironment.Facedwithphenomenon/theproblem4.我们应该把书和体育用品捐给需要的儿童,而不是空喊口号。(一般表达)Weshoulddonatebooksandsportsgoodstochildreninneed.Weshouldn’tshoutemptyslogans.(it作形式主语+定语从句)Insteadofshoutingemptyslogans,_____________________donatebooksandsportsgoodstochildren_________________________.itismoremeaningfultowhoneedthem/needingthem5.我们应该严格自觉遵守交通规则,红灯停,而不是抱怨交通拥堵。(一般表达)Weshouldstrictlyandvoluntarilyobeytrafficrules.Weshouldstopattheredlight.Weshouldn’tcomplainabouttrafficjams.(虚拟语气+倒装)_______________...