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写作技巧点拨系列(七)精研提纲材料,轻松驾驭提纲作文【典例导练】(2014·唐山模拟)作为一名高三学生的你,明年即将毕业。现在校报征稿,请根据以下要点写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对高三生活的体会和建议。1.对老师与家长的关爱表示感谢;2.向与自己发生过矛盾的同学表达歉意;3.努力学习,实现人生梦想;4.对学弟、学妹的建议。【写作指导】Ⅰ.常用句式(1)as...(2)Itwon’tbelongbefore...(3)without...(4)Firstly...Secondly...Finally...Ⅱ.黄金模板第一段:简述写这篇文章的用意Highschoolisalwaysconsideredasthemostcherishedperiodofone’slife(人生值得纪念).AsaSenior3student,itwon’tbelongbeforeIgraduate(即将毕业).Now,Ihavemuchtosharewithmyfellowstudents.第二段:梳理提纲要点,表达谢意、歉意和感悟Firstly,Iwouldliketoshowmyappreciationofhelpfromthosestandingbymealltheway谢意...Secondly,it’shightimetosaysorrytoclassmates歉意...Aboveall,...Justastheoldsayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”感悟第三段:对他人的希望FinallyIhope希望……【审题谋篇】信息全而不漏【佳句锤炼】词句精而高级1.作为一名高三学生,不久就毕业了,现在我有很多事情与同学们分享。(一般表达)I’mastudentinSenior3andI’llgraduatesoon.Now,IhavealotofthingsandI’llsharewithmyfellowstudents.(介词短语+固定句式+不定式作定语)___aSenior3student,____________________Igraduate.Now,Ihavemuch___________myfellowstudents.Aswon’tbelongbeforeittosharewith2.首先,我想向那些一直支持我,给我帮助和关爱的老师、父母、朋友表示感谢。如果没有他们的帮助和建议,我的生活就会与现在不一样。(一般表达)Atthebeginning,Iwouldliketoshowmyappreciationofhelpfromthosewhoarestandingbymealltheway,teachers,parents,includingfriends.Iftherewerenotheirhelpandadvice,mylifewouldbedifferent.(过渡语+分词作定语+虚拟语气)______,Iwouldliketoshowmyappreciationofhelpfrom_____________bymealltheway,teachers,parents,and______________.__________________________,mylifewouldbedifferent.FirstlythosestandingfriendsincludedWithouttheirhelpandadvice3.其次,到了向我伤害或误解过的同学道歉的时间了。交流和微笑充当友谊的桥梁。(一般表达)Then,it’shightimethatIshouldsaysorrytomyclassmates.Ihurtormisunderstoodthem.Communicationandsmilesareusedasbridgestofriendship.(过渡语+固定句式+定语从句)________,______________saysorrytomyclassmates______Ihurtormisunderstood.Communicationandsmiles_____bridgestofriendship.Secondlyit’shightimetowhomactas4.尤其重要的是,我已经下定决心努力学习,因为我相信,努力学习是成功的钥匙,“”正如古代谚语说的不劳无获。(一般表达)Importantly,I’vedecidedtomakeeveryefforttostudy.Ibelievehardworkisthekeytosuccess,liketheoldsaying,“Nopains,nogains.”(过渡语+高级词汇+原因状语从句)_____________________________tomakeeveryefforttostudy,___Ibelievehardworkisthekeytosuccess._______________________,“Nopains,nogains.”Aboveall,I’vemadeupmymindJustastheoldsayinggoesfor【连句成篇】过渡巧而自然Highschoolisalwaysconsideredasthemostcherishedperiodofone’slife.AsaSenior3student,itwon’tbelongbeforeIgraduate.Now,Ihavemuchtosharewithmyfellowstudents.Firstly,Iwouldliketoshowmyappreciationofhelpfromthosestandingbymealltheway,teachers,parentsandfriendsincluded.Withouttheirhelpandadvice,mylifewouldbedifferent.Secondly,it’shightimetosaysorrytomyclassmateswhomIhurtormisunderstood.Communicationandsmilesactasbridgestofriendship.Aboveall,I’vemadeupmymindtomakeeveryefforttostudy,forIbelievehardworkisthekeytosuccess.Justastheoldsayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”FinallyIhopethatalltheyoungerfellowscanmakefulluseoftime,becausetimeandtidewaitfornomen.【命题专家...